Possibly...possibly.
Of course, the book I'm betaing right now has a character named Phelan. Which means I keep imagining him to look like Phelous...
Because I'm a HUGE nerd.
WELL, IT'S PRETTY AMAZING SO FAR MY BETA NOTES ARE USELESS.
I just remembered why I'm the worlds WORST BETA READER.
99% of my comments are: "THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!"
Iiiii know which book you're reading and yes, it is indeed totally awesome.
WELL, IT'S PRETTY AMAZING SO FAR MY BETA NOTES ARE USELESS.
Para, I read up to chapter 12 last night and all I can say is damn... Why aren't you published yet?
Missus: That didn't work for some reason.
Yay!
I realised last night, that if I go to Starbucks a lot to write, it'll affect my money. And I have to be careful with my money this summer. Fuck.
I've actually only tried US agents, since the US market is a lot bigger. Sadly, interest in my adult UF has been pretty limited. I'm hoping that people might get a bit more excited about the YA UF.
I loved all of the action in the first few chapters. It shows that your lead female character is a fighter and a survivor. Maybe literary agents feel like that would intimidate the readers since most of them enjoy helpless heroines who are always saved by everyone.