I've just read a blinder of a line in a book I took a random chance on.
"The stallions ripe and ready muscles rippled under his shimmering coat as he thrusted himself to victory."
I'm sure I've written a fair few too, but I'm blurry with tiredness right now. Thank you Newborn baby
"The stallions ripe and ready muscles rippled under his shimmering coat as he thrusted himself to victory."
I'm sure I've written a fair few too, but I'm blurry with tiredness right now. Thank you Newborn baby