I think it's always a good idea to study the writing in published novels, but if you (generic you, not you in particular) are already of the opinion that such constructions are acceptable/unacceptable, then finding examples of them (or lack thereof) will only reinforce your position, I should think.
This is where we differ again. I don't go into a debate thinking 'generic you' (not me) is that closed minded.
If an editor is going to claim using these 'adjectives' can be a sign of a 'bad writer' well.... it just leaves it open for debate.
As for stylistic references, there's your style, house style, and then a style guide. The last two should compliment the first, nothing more. Gardner is aimed toward the literary market (I assume from the tone), which leaves genre fiction where in his rhetoric? Of course you can apply it genre fiction, but I'd much rather take style points from some respected authority in that genre. Otherwise you're white-washing over the subtle differences within genre writing.
As for what I use, the grammar references, they don't go indepth into genre differences either, they take fiction as a whole.
Both come up short.
Yet nothing yet stated in this thread leads me to believe that meaning can't be inferred naturally (e.g., you don't have to spoon-feed readers with 'upon' etc)), or that it's 'sloppy writing' when used for the right reasons.
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