Wish I could join you for early lunch mccardey. And I hope you had a great birthday.
Just before I fell asleep last night I realised what is wrong with my tokolosh story. Something much more exciting needs to happen early on and two of the characters have to go. A new character must come in and he will have to be developed and researched.
Scrapped the existing 4 000+ words and began again. Some scenes I may salvage later but the story has to be reworked from scratch.
200 words.
Just before I fell asleep last night I realised what is wrong with my tokolosh story. Something much more exciting needs to happen early on and two of the characters have to go. A new character must come in and he will have to be developed and researched.
Scrapped the existing 4 000+ words and began again. Some scenes I may salvage later but the story has to be reworked from scratch.
200 words.