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A "spent cobra"?...
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- Overuse of similes. So many of them. Everything is like-a-something. Let’s take a look at some of the ones I saw in the first fifteen pages!
Something was like: a thousand fireflies, a herd of buffalo, a water balloon with a leak, an alien, duck feet, a stealthy cat, having a seizure, an angry wolf, a spent cobra, a fat man on a bicycle, crack, Whitney Houston, red lace doily, biting into a carrot, uncooked tuna, etc.
(I actually liked the fat man on a bicycle one )
No, don't tell me. I don't think I want to know.
I agree with your whole post, by the way.
I hate that! There are certain authors who I find terrible but who are (to me) so inexplicably popular that when they've used an idea it may be years before that concept opens up for other writers to use (and hopefully put to better use). Every time I look at one of their books, I think, "Another great concept bites the dust." Frustration at the waste of a good concept just adds to the irritation of bad writing, for me....
But the part about that that really just ruined the book for me? The idea was so damn cool. I loved the concept. There was so much that it could have been. It was like each page was a disappointment that failed to reach my ever lowering expectations.
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That said, I'm pretty forgiving and will keep reading a badly written book, if there are other, redeeming factors. I just finished a novel that suffered from:
- action scenes that read like stage direction from a stunt choreographer,
- repetitious dialogue,
- head-hopping galore,
- under-developed supporting characters (a stage full of cardboard cutouts),
- loose ends (characters introduced but then dropped, as if they were just flashed on stage as set-up for later appearance in a series but had nothing to do with the present story),
- two different but unrelated main action plots (the story began with the hunt for one big bad but ended with the hunt for another, only Big Bad A and Big Bad B were not related to each other at all; instead of giving short shrift to two, he should have gone in depth on one), and
- general failure to maintain horror in a horror story (though he did hit some good notes a few times).
But overall, I'm in the camp that says bad writing is writing that knocks me out of the story. Good writing delivers the story and its impact. Bad writing interferes with it.