Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

MysteryRiter · Feb 2, 2012

Haha.

I'm at the resolution already. This might only end up to be a 42k story... Which is not good. I'm really hoping it'll get fixed in the edits.

Zoombie · Feb 2, 2012

Well, they just rodded one building, a power planet, and a few control centers. But the resulting aftereffects still kill a hundred or so people and injure thousands.

Sonic booms shattering billions of window panes, deafening and knocking people over, the sudden loss of power completely throwing out of whack the climate control and environment systems, the downing of a city wide control system that handles traffic and such.

It's not a good...

But it could have been worse! These were precision strikes.

amlptj · Feb 3, 2012

anyone still up.

I wanted to go to sleep for the rest of the night. Fell asleep at 9 i was so tired. Then i woke up at 2:30 and havent been able to go back to sleep since.

So what am i going to do now that i'm awake? do my school assignment! Yeah i'm actually excited about this... because its a writing one. Is this what college is like for everyone else... fun?

amlptj · Feb 3, 2012

so never did the assignment! Hehehe what did i do for the last 3 hours. Editing/revising.

I'm going to send in my the first 40 pages of my first book for all 4 of my class assignments. So i can get more feedback on them!

Thalia · Feb 3, 2012

Don't worry, guys, you can fix that in revisions. Add some subplots or the like. I once added 30,000 words in revisions :banana:

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

I still feel sick. I can't bear to really eat anything right now... but I'm hungry.

Thalia · Feb 3, 2012

BRAT, Lisa. That's what you eat.

Bananas
Rice
Apple Sauce
Toast

Also, you need to drink lots of water and eat soup.

What kind of sick are you?

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

Cold, and bile keeps rising in my throat.

I had soup and bread last night. Mum's gone to buy some more.

ETA: Oh, and we're having chilli con carne tonight.

Thalia · Feb 3, 2012

just keep drinking water, and lemon tea with honey.

Missus Akasha · Feb 3, 2012

I hope you feel better, Lisa. :<

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

EW. Tea. EW. Honey.

I am hoping Mum's bought/buying more hot chocolate. It helps me sleep when I'm ill. :3

Horserider · Feb 3, 2012

Feel better, Lisa!

My roommate and I are still sick too. I just feel really tired and shaky right now. I know that I need to eat but there's nothing in the dorm that appeals to me and I don't want to walk down and get something.

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

I know the feeling.

I have decided that, TMB wise, that...

a) Daniel is going to commit suicide
b) I'm going to sumbit the first 2.5K and a synopsis for coursework for one of my classes.

CharacterInWhite · Feb 3, 2012

Everybody's sick. People are writing about suicide now. Chocolate and tea alike are not good enough.

Everybody gets free hugs! And kittens! Unless you're allergic to kittens, in which case--PUPPIES!

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

I love both.

amlptj · Feb 3, 2012

I'm sick too Lisa. Just skipped my class.

Had this weird back spasm last night while in class. Got another one at 2:30 in the morning last night and it didnt go away till 3:30... having Will ask his brother if i should go to a doctor.

Then this morning I got really nauseous...ugh!!!

Missus Akasha · Feb 3, 2012

Wow, I hope everyone feels better soon! :<

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

What's Blood Related about?

Missus Akasha · Feb 3, 2012

Well, I know that everyone is probably sick and tired of vampire stories by now, but Blood Related is about a girl who is a Varcolac (half vampire-half werewolf=disgrace/abomination) who is caught in an ancient war between the Ageless (vampires) and Rougarou (werewolves) because she accidentally awakens an ancient creature thought to be extinct called a Nosferatu (a vampire that feeds on other vampires).

Thalia · Feb 3, 2012

Lisa- you hate tea? you are no longer an awesome brit. AT ALL.

I mean seriously, it is impossible to hate tea, because THERE ARE OVER 500 FLAVORS OF TEA.

there are teas that taste exactly 110% the same as coffee.

there's iced teas that taste exactly like every juice.

there's herbal tea, and white tea, and green tea, and black tea, and rooibos tea and oolong tea and maté tea and pu'erh tea and need I go on?

and tea is so good for you, you can't hate it, even if you don't like the taste of ANY.

ETA: Tea is my reason for living. It is my sanity lifeline. Tea is as sacred as my family to me.

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

Underdogs has a half-werewolf as the FMC.

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

Thalia said:
Lisa- you hate tea? you are no longer an awesome brit. AT ALL.

I mean seriously, it is impossible to hate tea, because THERE ARE OVER 500 FLAVORS OF TEA.

there are teas that taste exactly 110% the same as coffee.

there's iced teas that taste exactly like every juice.

there's herbal tea, and white tea, and green tea, and black tea, and rooibos tea and oolong tea and maté tea and pu'erh tea and need I go on?

and tea is so good for you, you can't hate it, even if you don't like the taste of ANY.

ETA: Tea is my reason for living. It is my sanity lifeline. Tea is as sacred as my family to me.

I have never come across a tea that I like. I prefer coffee, and I don't have coffee that much.

Missus Akasha · Feb 3, 2012

lisalulu09 said:
Underdogs has a half-werewolf as the FMC.

Who is Underdogs by?

lisalulu09 · Feb 3, 2012

XD It's one of my unfinished WIPs.

Missus Akasha · Feb 3, 2012

Oh, LOL. I hope you finish it one day then! :]

Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

Murder isn't so bad...

Dragon of the Multiverse

Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!

Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!

better off with a really good lie

Potterhead Gleek

better off with a really good lie

Potterhead Gleek

better off with a really good lie

I'm a monster. I'm a saint.

Potterhead Gleek

Ever onward

Potterhead Gleek

Kind of a big deal

Potterhead Gleek

Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!

I'm a monster. I'm a saint.

Potterhead Gleek

I'm a monster. I'm a saint.

better off with a really good lie

Potterhead Gleek

Potterhead Gleek

I'm a monster. I'm a saint.

Potterhead Gleek

I'm a monster. I'm a saint.