Hi guys, so i'm re-reading a chapter in my WIP before I send it out to my CP and i'm really struggling with this bit. I don't know if I should italicize 'That's odd' or leave it the way it is. I keep picturing my MC actually saying the sentence out loud in her own mind, which is why i'm thinking I should italicize it. OR is there a better way to show this? I don't know if this makes any sense but any help from you guys would be greatly appreciated!
[FONT="]"A gentle breeze sweeps some dead leaves into the house and I notice the small opening of the door. That’s odd. Baba never leaves the house without locking the door.[/FONT]"
[FONT="]"A gentle breeze sweeps some dead leaves into the house and I notice the small opening of the door. That’s odd. Baba never leaves the house without locking the door.[/FONT]"