Obsessive Rep Point Checkers Club (Volume IV)

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

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Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

I've been working on book II, as you know. I think I came up with a title.

Vision of Serpents.

Thoughts?

slcboston · Jun 4, 2012

Snakes.

Why did it have to be snakes?

Nah, sounds good to me, Vince.

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

That's was kind of my wife's reaction.

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

I was originally thinking Vision of Betrayal. But that doesn't sound very paranormal-ish.

I wouldn't mind any suggestions.

DeleyanLee · Jun 4, 2012

And serpents are paranormal? :Wha:

What's the paranormal element(s) in the book?

parumpdragon · Jun 4, 2012

I hate to say this, but I have my titles picked out for all four books. I know, it's lame. But there was a theme going on. :/

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

She's psychic. See's dead people. Has visions. Etc.

In the 1st book, after her parents are killed, she moves to their home town, with her Uncle and finally meets the boy she's been dreaming of her entire life. In most of those visions, he falls in love with her. But in one that has repeated more times than she can count, he murders her.

Plus the moment she gets into town, she keeps having visions of these things she calls Shadow Creatures that want her dead.

In the follow up, the shadow creatures return. She also keeps having dreams of a giant snake slithering throughout the town. People she had learned to trust are acting badly. And people are dying, sometimes through their own hand.

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

I had a different tittle idea for the first book, which I can't even remember. It was a choice between that and Visions of Shadows. But I decided on VOS because I knew I planned sequels. It's a series. And I wanted to have a common thread. So the idea is each one would be Vision of ___________. (Fill in the blank.)

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

parumpdragon said:
I hate to say this, but I have my titles picked out for all four books. I know, it's lame. But there was a theme going on. :/

Is it too soon to ask what they are?

DeleyanLee · Jun 4, 2012

Visions of Death

Visions of Other

Visions of Unknown

You don't just have "Visions of ______ " going. Your first word was distinctly paranormal. You have to decide if you're going to keep that paranormal element (I think it's advisable, but it's your choice) or not and truly establish how the series is going to work.

You wanted opinions.

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

DeleyanLee said:
Visions of Death

Visions of Other

Visions of Unknown

You don't just have "Visions of ______ " going. Your first word was distinctly paranormal. You have to decide if you're going to keep that paranormal element (I think it's advisable, but it's your choice) or not and truly establish how the series is going to work.

You wanted opinions.

I was thinking the last one might be Vision of Death.

I do want opinions. Please explain the above a bit more. My first word? You mean the word Vision, or the word Shadows?

parumpdragon · Jun 4, 2012

Vince524 said:
Is it too soon to ask what they are?

Not sure :/

DeleyanLee · Jun 4, 2012

Vince524 said:
I do want opinions. Please explain the above a bit more. My first word? You mean the word Vision, or the word Shadows?

Wordo. *sigh* Your first TITLE.

Vince524 · Jun 4, 2012

So Vision of Serpents doesn't sound supernatural?

How about Vision of Darkness?

parumpdragon · Jun 5, 2012

Morning - not sure Vince.

What about "Visions of Darkness"? You know, with it being book #2 and all.

slcboston · Jun 5, 2012

Vince524 said:
So Vision of Serpents doesn't sound supernatural?

How about Vision of Darkness?

Honestly Vince, unless it was in the non-fiction section under herpetology, your original idea sounds supernatural enough to me.

It's your book, your story. Pick what fits.

:e2writer:

slcboston · Jun 5, 2012

Also,

Morning Reppers

:Coffee:

Vince524 · Jun 5, 2012

Ug, just dealt with a real asshole customer who said that I should keep in mind that he was the High School Bully that used to beat people like me up in High School.

Unfortunately, I had to stay professional.

slcboston · Jun 5, 2012

Vince524 said:
Ug, just dealt with a real asshole customer who said that I should keep in mind that he was the High School Bully that used to beat people like me up in High School.

Unfortunately, I had to stay professional.

Did you threaten to turn him in to the principal? Because I would have.

BeatrixKiddo · Jun 5, 2012

Vince524 said:
She's psychic. See's dead people. Has visions. Etc.

In the 1st book, after her parents are killed, she moves to their home town, with her Uncle and finally meets the boy she's been dreaming of her entire life. In most of those visions, he falls in love with her. But in one that has repeated more times than she can count, he murders her.

Plus the moment she gets into town, she keeps having visions of these things she calls Shadow Creatures that want her dead.

In the follow up, the shadow creatures return. She also keeps having dreams of a giant snake slithering throughout the town. People she had learned to trust are acting badly. And people are dying, sometimes through their own hand.

What about, Visions of Dead.
It's quirky and the word "dead" will catch the eye.

slcboston said:
Honestly Vince, unless it was in the non-fiction section under herpetology...

It's the only field where you have to use extra protection to study the subject.

I can't help myself...I'm 12.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herpetology

Vince524 · Jun 5, 2012

Well, I was thinking the last of the seriess would be Vision of Death.

Vince524 · Jun 5, 2012

parumpdragon · Jun 5, 2012

Vince524 said:

Nice Vince - really nice!

parumpdragon · Jun 5, 2012

Wow is it quiet in here!

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