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Writing a bio on a major league baseball player in the early half of the 20th Century. Here's the first paragraph:
[FONT="]It was the Golden Age of baseball. When gods walked the Earth clad in wool flannels of white and gray, holding court in pastoral palaces of green grass and brown soil, each filled with adoring followers. And Mt. Olympus lay within the five boroughs of New York City. [/FONT]
Would that make you read on, or hurl your lunch into the nearest handy receptacle?
[FONT="]It was the Golden Age of baseball. When gods walked the Earth clad in wool flannels of white and gray, holding court in pastoral palaces of green grass and brown soil, each filled with adoring followers. And Mt. Olympus lay within the five boroughs of New York City. [/FONT]
Would that make you read on, or hurl your lunch into the nearest handy receptacle?