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After the colon, should "if" be capitalized?
The realization that shakes me to the core is this: if I want to keep him, I have to move on from the person who stares back at me in the mirror every morning.
Should I rephrase it? "The realization that shakes me to the core is if I want to keep him, I have to move on from the person who stares back at me in the mirror every morning."
I want to avoid a second "that" (...to the core is that). Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!
The realization that shakes me to the core is this: if I want to keep him, I have to move on from the person who stares back at me in the mirror every morning.
Should I rephrase it? "The realization that shakes me to the core is if I want to keep him, I have to move on from the person who stares back at me in the mirror every morning."
I want to avoid a second "that" (...to the core is that). Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!