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Ganesha, I prefer the "trimmed-down" version you just posted. I think it's more powerful. I like it a lot.
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Oh well, still glad I popped in to see the first few stages. I also liked the 'leaner' version (a useless point to make at this stage)...would very much like to see the final product though - and offer more in-depth input.
Oh well, still glad I popped in to see the first few stages. I also liked the 'leaner' version (a useless point to make at this stage)...would very much like to see the final product though - and offer more in-depth input.
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Kie, I posted on Poetry Crit. I think the comment about the work being more protected on that site makes sense.
so, I moved it. Please give me your thoughts.
so, I moved it. Please give me your thoughts.
You should probably delete the parts here. If you want to try to submit it somewhere for publication, you don't want it to be available publicly online anywhere.