Ray's House of Love (Volume II)

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Trevor Bruhn

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I hate when people say, "it's not the heat, it's the humidity
The other end of that spectrum, Sass, is often heard in Arizona about this time of year. 120? Yes, but it's a DRYYYYY heat. Maryn and I heard this long ago, Dangerous Bill does in the present time. I picture DB trying to write in a basement, trying not to sweat on his keyboard, while the life-sustaining AC works overtime.
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At one time we talked about returning to Arizona, but now there are all kinds of reasons not to. Among them is that dry air about killed my sinuses, which have only gotten worse over time.

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Why cannot businesses work better?

I have a GroupOn soon to expire. Today I attempted to order something which used it. First effort, Gateway Error - Order Declined. Second attempt, Gateway Error - Duplicate Order. So I called the customer service number, which hung up on me.

Fine way to run a business.

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Clutter: as a no longer married aging male, I have a great tolerance for the physical version of it, much more than the tubbers here with the XX chromosome set. But I can make war on literary clutter! I just pasted a revision of a 28.5 WC novella which had slimmed down to 27K.

Trevor, flying the S&W-17 flag. (the one where the banner says, instead of 'dont tread on me', says Omit Needless Words).
 

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Mr. Maryn says if I'd never learned to read or sew our house would be much cleaner--but I have to note I'd be a poorly dressed idiot.

Muggy again today. Ugh.

Maryn, whose AC can't really keep up
 

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Oh yes, so many books! and craft things! plus i am sentimental. then I have a collector hubby who is also sentimental. I'm amazed we do as well as we do with clutter.
 

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I spent $43 on fabric I don't need just yesterday. "But honey, it was rayon, on sale!" He won't care about the money, but he'll mention I'm out of storage if he sees the package when he gets home.

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Of course I welcome all input, but I'd especially like to hear Maryn's bent on this because we are often like-minded in our old-school, grammar-Nazi ways.

Yes, I readily acknowledge that the HOL is usually the last place we discuss in-depth writing issues as we soak and drink, but I just don't want to get out of the hot tub to explore other venues right now. So, here's the issue:

Examine this line: "Let the detectives do their jobs."

Now, what think y'all about the plurality of the last word in that sentence? I can make several arguments, pro and con, for both cases, but I'd like to hear what less-insane minds (maybe) think. And let's make the line, "Let the police do their jobs," as it was originally written, I find on a second look...damn my short-term memory.

EDIT: Overall, I lean toward 'job' rather than 'jobs' because all the detectives, or more accurately, the singular form, 'police', have the same job, hence the singularity of their job. Granted, there's leeway because it's dialog rather than narrative. (Maybe I should get back on the meds.)

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I spent $43 on fabric I don't need just yesterday. "But honey, it was rayon, on sale!" He won't care about the money, but he'll mention I'm out of storage if he sees the package when he gets home.

Maryn, who will fill the basement with tubs of fabric
I think you should buy a lot more. At the sale price, you could save enough to soon be a millionaire. I'm sure Mr. Maryn will be delighted.
 

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Well, who wouldn't be delighted to be a millionaire, eh?

BTW, your avatar of a snake with leprosy is awesome.

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Well, jobs suck, yet they pay the bills. Whatcha gonna do?
 

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Well, who wouldn't be delighted to be a millionaire, eh?

BTW, your avatar of a snake with leprosy is awesome.

Maryn, who's always grinning when speaking with you
:Hug2:

It's a pic of a piece of driftwood in our backyard, with just a bit of Pandora/Russ Photoshop effort on the eye. Truly, she's the REAL artist.
 

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it looks like the two headed monster in the movie Willow.

anyway I was answering your post, Russ, should it be job or jobs.

my job doesn't suck but if I win the lottery I'm outa here.
 

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Why cannot businesses work better?

I have a GroupOn soon to expire. Today I attempted to order something which used it. First effort, Gateway Error - Order Declined. Second attempt, Gateway Error - Duplicate Order. So I called the customer service number, which hung up on me.

Fine way to run a business.

Maryn, grumpy now

I've never used GroupOn. I keep thinking about trying it though. That is pretty lousy, Maryn.

My mom found an article about Barnes & Noble now possibly going out of business? I never thought I'd see all the major bookstores close in my lifetime. Makes me sad.
 

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it looks like the two headed monster in the movie Willow.

anyway I was answering your post, Russ, should it be job or jobs.

my job doesn't suck but if I win the lottery I'm outa here.
To job or jobs, that IS the question.
 

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That's weird. My posts aren't showing up.

*testing*

Nevermind, they are. (I'm slow today)
 

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I have never used an Apple product, but I'm going with jobs on this one.
One thing we, or our readers, should take away from watching all these CSI shows on the tube is that detectives do different jobs. One will be taking the crime scene photos, the forensic person will be bagging anything with DNA on it, while the Sgt. Friday type (Maryn, do you think they all get that reference to the 50s?) is interviewing witnesses.
BTW, Russ, I like the grammar-nazi reference. Sometimes I imagine a bunker where those brave souls are trying to protect the last surviving Whom from a fierce bombardment of Facebooks and twits.
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Cleaning weekend here: taking advantage of my girlfriend's absence to (with her permission) pile all the crap on use her side of the bed as a staging area.
 
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