Thanks I'm just debating in my head my opening, and may end up switching chapter one with chapter three but not exactly sure yet. I had someone say I had a spelling error and for the life of me I couldn't find it, and then when I asked that person to show me my spelling error I got crickets.Sure, why not? I find it phenomenally useful to hear what does or doesn't work for readers of my opening sentences, what confuses them and why, what feelings I evoke (if any) and where my grammar has fallen over. But not everybody wants that. Some just want a yes, run with it or a no, revise it. And that's fine too. I do like to offer justification for my own crits, but they're all entirely IMHO, and I'm sure I could rein it in if you wanted a response without a crit.
ETA: I look forward to reading your work.
Yes I am thankful to anyone who takes the time to review, I hope it didn't seem like I was unappreciative of input. Sometimes it can be tricky when typing and the tone gets lost or misunderstood.Sometimes it takes more effort than others to explain why an opening doesn't work. If you don't find anything useful in a particular critique (long or short), thank the person who gave it and move on.
Happy Sunday fellow writers... I will continue to stalk this thread