Beta Reader for First Chapter (Contemp. YA)

Hello AWers.

Can someone help me with my first chapter?

I need someone to critique it. I would've posted it in the Share Your Work thread, but it's a little over 2.5k words.

It's a contemporary YA novel. I'm willing to critique your work as well. I've taken 3 years of English in college (so far), if that helps your decision.

Thanks.

Thank you!

For others: I don't mind having more than one person critique it.