Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

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Just saw this on Twitter. It's hilariously true:
"Ah, Presidents Day! When our nation celebrates Lincoln & Washington with sales at mattress stores."

Would anyone be willing to read and critique a few paragraphs from "Inevitable"?
 

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I have the craziest big lens-less 3D glasses on, and my hair is in huge pigtails. I love theatre. And playing Penny is the funnest thing ever.

Right now they're running "Welcome To The 60s" with the live band and mikes and it's FABULOUS.
 

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I'm thinking about doing an online internship for Musa Publishing. Hmm...
 

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I just began writing a short story to take my mind off my novel. And I like the story - dare I say it - thus far. It's sweet and upbeat, something entirely new to me.
 

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Haha, that sounds fun, Tally!

I'm glad the interview went okay, HR!
 

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Morning thread. I have no idea why I'm up this early. But I'm going to eat breakfast and watch some anime and then make myself write, even though I should probably study for the Japanese Culture quiz I have later.
 

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I'm watching Grimm. The series started over here last Monday, but I don't have the channel in my room so I have to record it.

Also, I'm hungry but I don't know what to have for lunch.
 

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The first episode was bloody creepy.

Google is not helpful sometimes. ><
 

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While I like Grimms' Fairytales, I don't think I could watch the show. Not a fan of viewing creepy things lol. I'll stick with Once Upon a Time :)
 

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That hasn't started in the UK yet. :(

My laptop switched itself off again. I don't know why it keeps doing that.
 

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HEY LISA I HAVE A QUESTION FOR YOU MY LONDONER FRIEND.

I know that the times have changed, and London today is not the same as London 1882, but what area of London to you think Emil would have lived in?

I'm pretty sure Corwin lived in Bloomsbury, based on my history research, but I'm still not sure.

ETA: The only character I'm sure of doesn't show up 'till OWHH, is my all time favorite character, and is from Chelsea.
 

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Well, he's a posh little lord, lol, so somewhere like... Chelsea and Kenisington, I imagine. Or Westminster.

I apologise if my spelling is crap.
 

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I'm figuring out where all my characters live and where everything is so I can be better at describing.

Belgravia is basically between Chelsea and Westminster, I think.
 

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I'm going to be writing a bit of Sticks and Stones while watching TV (focusing on plotting at night at the moment) and OMG, this scene is ridiculous.
 
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