Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

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Allaboutwords13

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Yeh, one reason why I only got an F in my exam. But apparently that was the highest we could get. Which always confused me.
My GCSE's in general were a complete failure, anyway. lol And now it's starting to catch up on me. *sigh* I bet if I'd gone to private school none of this would have happened. lol
 

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I really like the idea of this, Zoom, and I think Para's edits are spot-on.

I like math, but I would hope so, since I work in finance :tongue
 

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I enjoyed maths so much that I seriously considered doing a maths degree, but I let my older brother put me off - he was in the process of failing his maths degree at the time.
 
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I've actually changed it.

[FONT=&quot]Math is the scariest thing in the universe. That isn’t a joke. Math destroyed Hiroshima, San Palo, Vicksburg.[/FONT]

Cause in SS, I reference Vicksburg still being a glowing crater, and I figure that including hiroshima means everyone will get that, yes, there have been multiple nukes set off in DD's timeline - both during the American Civil War of 2019-2021.
 

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I enjoyed maths so much that I seriously considered doing a maths degree, but I let my older brother put me off - he was in the process of failing his maths degree at the time.

That's a win for the world, since you have a ridiculous talent at figuring out how to fix other people's writing problems! I'm just waiting for you to be a top editor at one of the Big 6 :D
 

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This is a more finalized version.

Math is the scariest thing in the universe. That isn’t a joke. Math destroyed Hiroshima, San Paulo, Vicksburg. Math killed my parents.


I don’t know what my parents were doing on the Elevator at that instant. They might have been on a tea break. They might have been building. They might have been joking. They might have been thinking of me.


The Elevator orbited at three kilometers a second, and hung thirty thousand kilometers above the surface of the Earth. The hijacked shuttle weighed half a ton and was going ten kilometers every second.


I saw the flash from my window, a wink in the corner of my eyes. I almost missed it, because my window was dominated by the video of my girlfriend, Sarah.


Math is the cruelest thing in the universe. Math described the reality of space travel, out of the comforting visions of spec-fic shows. We don’t have anti-gravity. We don’t have fusion engines or warp drive or anything that could get around that one simple problem: [FONT=&quot]Δvo = sqrt[ (G * Pm) / Pr ][/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Oh, don’t look at me like that. This is child’s play up here. The change in velocity required to get into orbit is equal to the square root of the gravitational constant of the universe times the Earth’s mass divided by its radius. [/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]That comes out to a lot of fuel. A lot of energy. A lot of expensive parts and high paid scientists and technicians, and factories. A single kilogram of luggage costs more than I made as an apprentice mucking out algae vats in a year. And, despite what they say about spacer girls, I weigh a lot more than a kilo. Sarah weighed more than me, and she worked on a farm and earned even less. [/FONT]


I’d been watching the Elevator come together since I was old enough to remember. But when I met Sarah online, I stopped watching it enviously, like the monster that stole Dad and Mom every month. I started watching it with a drooling anticipation I’d formerly reserved for porn-vids. The Elevator promised a wonderful solution to a cruel equation.


Then, in a single flash, it was gone.


And that’s where I want to start you, because you’ve never been up here. You’ve grown up in a city, on a farm, in an arc, and you might think you know inhospitable, but you don’t know crap. You’ve grown up on the one thing that matters, the Earth. Surrounded by an atmosphere, protected by a magnetosphere, with enough mass to hold you down tight, with a sun that’s just far enough to keep you warm without burning, but close enough to not freeze you.


That’s why you have to understand. Right now. Math is scary and math is cruel, because math describes space, and space does not just let you grow up there. It grabs you and it etches itself into you and never ever lets you go.
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This is where I’m going to start.[/FONT]
 

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I am a huge fan of tabletop roleplaying games. My favorite is Aberrant.

Aberrant.jpg



It takes place in a slightly different 2011, wherein humanity's destiny has been altered by the presence of "Homo Sapians Novus", or Novas, who are people with superhuman powers.

Think...X-Men, but instead of being hated and despised by the ruck and run of humanity, Novas are HUGELY POPULAR.

I love it because it's a game of geopolitical consequences writ large, with high concept ideas being thrown out left and right, and the superheroes actually have a continual, persistent effect on the world. Also, there aren't any super-villains...if only because the greediest novas can make more money doing the talk-show circuit than by robbing banks.

But, I was curious.

See, in the backstory, it claims that novas are capable of simulating nuclear discharges with their powers. I wondered...was this the case?

And so, I went through the rule book and created a nova who - at the very beginning of the game, without any extra experience points or power - could IN FACT create a spread of explosions over almost 5 kilometers, each explosion being 540 feet in radius, and doing [10]+16 Dice of lethal damage.

By way of comparison, an anti-tank missile does [10]+12 lethal dice of damage, and it's blast is only 15 meters.

Also, an anti-tank missile costs almost 40k, while a nova can discharge like that once every 3 seconds, almost 30 times in a row.

So, yes, novas CAN simulate nuclear discharges!

Now, you may be wondering why I've been rambling about this for no reason!

Well, I was wondering...

How much could I steal from this before I get sued?

(I kid, I kid)

(Okay, not really, I want to write a book that's like Aberrant, cause IT'S SO COOL!)

(But, then again, GETTING SUED)
 

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Write or Die?

Stupid cold getting in the way of me hitting 10K. :(
 

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Yes... hot chocolate, cold and flu tablet, and an early night for me, methinks.

Bye!
 

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Just got home a little bit ago! I am now part of D&D group, which I've been wanting for like...years. Seriously. Praise god for the people I hang out with in Japanese.
 
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