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Old 05-08-2013, 06:41 AM   #9026
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Thin infinitives
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Old 05-08-2013, 06:37 PM   #9027
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"Singularity
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Old 05-09-2013, 06:11 PM   #9028
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Lonely Hearts' Club Band,
never same without Pepper
slow Vegas decline.
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Old 05-09-2013, 09:20 PM   #9029
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Slow Vegas decline?
Slip a token in the slot
and pull the trigger.
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Old 05-09-2013, 09:53 PM   #9030
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And pull! The trigger
is a mountain you must climb,
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Old 05-10-2013, 11:04 AM   #9031
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Conscience thinning air
high mountainous altitudes
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Old 05-10-2013, 06:36 PM   #9032
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Dizzy boundaries--
skyscrapers of the Muir Woods
point to the pale moon.


Had to change dizzying for sylable count.
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Old 05-11-2013, 09:36 AM   #9033
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point to the pale moon
lone wolf howling at trail's end
the startled moose bolts
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Old 05-11-2013, 11:05 PM   #9034
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the startled moose bolts
moosedom minutes move meadows
twirled upon, nose tipped
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Old 05-12-2013, 01:05 AM   #9035
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twirled upon, nose tipped
to the sun, her grace in one
perfect pirourette.




('tipped' added to top row for 5 syl.)
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Old 05-13-2013, 06:05 PM   #9036
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Perfect pirouette:
The Milky Way spins around
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Old 05-13-2013, 09:39 PM   #9037
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It's dark--star axis,
black hole, galaxy sucker--
Satan stores his souls.
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Old 05-13-2013, 11:06 PM   #9038
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Satan stores his souls
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Old 05-14-2013, 12:33 AM   #9039
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mismatched, the stench, foul.
such are we in wild embrace,
me, myself and I.
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Old 05-15-2013, 04:53 AM   #9040
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me, myself and I.
traveling through space and time
have come to a halt
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Have come to a halt
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Old 05-15-2013, 06:42 AM   #9042
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Us. Jaded cynics.
Victims of our own parade--
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