I'm looking for beta readers to go through my WIP. The novel is more or less about a man who seeks revenge for the genocide against his people and his experiences. A lot of war, fighting, magic, and so forth.
They copy I'm willing to send is extremely rough. Little to no dialogues are included, and most things are described frankly. It is mostly the main plot story. Most of the world building is still being sorted out. Current body is around 25K+ words.
The title is: Children of Aether: Bloodlust
For the most part, im looking for people who can review the overall plot story and give me some feedback. Any form of suggestions, critiques, and edits would be great - I don't need anything too particularly detailed in form of feedback (nothing line-by-line for instance). Looking for suggestions on world building as well.
Contact me for more info:
email: [email protected]
AIM: dav9377
facebook: http://www.facebook.com/dviz9377
They copy I'm willing to send is extremely rough. Little to no dialogues are included, and most things are described frankly. It is mostly the main plot story. Most of the world building is still being sorted out. Current body is around 25K+ words.
The title is: Children of Aether: Bloodlust
For the most part, im looking for people who can review the overall plot story and give me some feedback. Any form of suggestions, critiques, and edits would be great - I don't need anything too particularly detailed in form of feedback (nothing line-by-line for instance). Looking for suggestions on world building as well.
Contact me for more info:
email: [email protected]
AIM: dav9377
facebook: http://www.facebook.com/dviz9377
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