3 nonfiction articles that need feedback

ESL · May 2, 2012

I have written three articles for children's magazines that need feedback. They are all nonfiction. Each article ranges from about 600 words to about 900 words. The three articles totaled a little over 2000 words. In return, I will read your manuscript (whether it's MGs, YAs or any other type) about the same length. I have done many critiques before.

Thanks,
Shaun

aikigypsy · May 3, 2012

I could have a look. Do you want more general feedback, or more of a proofread/line edit?

I'll PM you my email address.

ESL · May 8, 2012

anyone willing to swap? I would appreiciate it!

I survived · May 9, 2012

I'm writing a novel so swapping wouldn't work but I'd be willing to take a look. Same question as alkigypsy what type of reader are you looking for? PM me if you need the help

SpiderGal · May 10, 2012

I can have a look. I'm a reporter for a national publication, and write non-fiction to earn bread and butter.

worldwriter · May 11, 2012

I'd be happy to take a look.

worldwriter · May 19, 2012

Hi Shaun -

Thank you for the opportunity to read and beta your work.

I returned the docs to you via email and hope you find my notes and suggestions helpful!

Good luck!

I survived · May 19, 2012

Just returned your pieces via e-mail. Thanks for the opportunity.

ESL · May 20, 2012

Thank you, Amelia, Ann Marie and Alan for the critiques. Great suggestions and comments.

Shaun

ceterumcenseo · Aug 10, 2012

Ack. Guess I'm too late to the game to ask if you want to swap?

I am currently writing a 1,000 word pseudo-historical essay on sumptuary laws and a 100 word paragraph on a nosy man eavesdropping on his co-workers, both of which should be amusing.

3 nonfiction articles that need feedback

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