I have two sentences that I'm pretty sure are punctuated badly. However, I refuse to change them.
Can someone help me out here?
I'm posting the sentences just as I have them now...only replacing names. Explanations will be great also. Thank you.
(1) He could see her moving; no, gliding furiously towards the door.
(2) Gerard had never seen her before, but whoever she was-- she was a younger version of his mother with darker hair.
Can someone help me out here?
I'm posting the sentences just as I have them now...only replacing names. Explanations will be great also. Thank you.
(1) He could see her moving; no, gliding furiously towards the door.
(2) Gerard had never seen her before, but whoever she was-- she was a younger version of his mother with darker hair.