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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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‘Round harbors, praying on the discarded,
children go through the pockets of the damned. Sailors, who thought themselves free, lie martyred ‘round harbors. Praying on the discarded flotsam, kids look for treasures unguarded mixed in between the bodies in the sand ‘round harbors. Praying on, the discarded children go through the pockets of the damned. Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 04-10-2012 at 07:51 PM. Reason: word change |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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Children go through. The pockets of the damned
give no quarter to frail youth, who are apt to thwart the dueling swords, their hearts too crammed. Children go through the pockets of the damned, grasping lockets stolen when they were scammed, and the map that shows where all the kidnapped children go. Through the pockets of the damned, give no quarter to frail youth who are apt. Last edited by Perscribo; 04-11-2012 at 12:33 AM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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give no quarter! to frail youth who are apt,
let them find their way! what need they have through streets of mistrust, a trap! give no quarter, to frail youth who are apt, who dance, disingenous, at every snap; the culture is their annointing salve, give no qurarter to frail youth who are apt, let them find their way! what need they have?
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#404 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
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Let them find their way! what need they have
St. Elmo's fire and the northern most star On the horizon with a white moon's halve Let them find their way! what need they have The magical waves of midnight's soothing salve Comfort aided worried souls from afar Let them find their way! what need they have St. Elmo's fire and the northern most star! |
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#405 |
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come in, all you jesters
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: enter, all you fools
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St. Elmo's fire and the northernmost star
inspire the neighbourhood dreamers tonight. Lofty, distant, bright and cold as they are, St. Elmo's fire and the northernmost star shine on poets, each a fey avatar of their endless, useless powers. Might St. Elmo's fire and the northernmost star inspire the neighbourhood dreamers tonight! |
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practical experience, FTW
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Inspire the neighbourhood dreamers tonight.
Stray the streets along with us lunatics. We'll dance in the dark and under streetlights inspire. The neighbourhood dreamers tonight, meanwhile, may cool on the fire escape's flight while looking down as madmen and halfwits inspire the neighbourhood. Dreamers unite! Stray the streets along with us lunatics. Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 05-04-2012 at 11:54 PM. |
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#407 |
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come in, all you jesters
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: enter, all you fools
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Stray the streets along with us. Lunatics
rustle papers and try to guess our names in song, beating time with their walking-sticks. From one lamplight to the next, our heel-clicks keep time, as a dabbing pointillist picks each colour-fleck and its place in the frame. Stray the streets along with us, lunatics! Rustle papers and try to guess our names! Last edited by poetinahat; 05-04-2012 at 08:01 AM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
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rustle papers and try to guess our names,
patriots in resistance, equal in freedom's struggle; when you come to take us, expect our passions' flames, rustle papers and try to guess our names. regardless the loss and misery's inflicted pains, our life we give to liberty, justice struck for all; rustle papers and try to guess our names, patriots in resistance, equal in freedom's struggle.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
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Patriots in resistance, equal freedom's struggle
All gather each night at the liberty tree Raised voice in song, raised flag, tea did guggle Patriots in resistance, equal freedom's struggle Against unlawful restraints and willingly smuggle People to assembles imprisioned to set them free Patriots in resistance, equal freedom's struggle All gather each night at the liberty tree. |
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#410 |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
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All gather, each night, at the liberty tree
to tell the tales of your forgotten friends who are less than flesh—in only memory, all gathered each night. At the liberty tree, and under its shade, by an outline, we see them and their former restrictive grave attend all. Gather each night at the liberty tree to tell the tales of your forgotten, friends.
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
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to tell the tales of your forgotten friends
you must conujure up memories that lurk within; recount the buried past, where truth attends, to tell the tales of your forgotten friends. to the insignificant, who faithfully followed, you sinned, bullied your way and broke their hearts to the end; to tell the tales of your forgotten friends, you must conjure up memories that lurk within.
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#412 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
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You must conjure up memories that lurk within;
then raise your glass and drink with me. We'll drink to the departed, and speak of the sins you must conjure up. Memories that lurk within tend to make men bold—fistfights you will always win in hindsight. Too drunk to believe? You must. Conjure up memories that lurk within; then raise your glass and drink with me. |
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One of the most important people in the world
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then, raise your glass and drink with me!
To birth and death and all that's inbetween. Naked we came, with nary a clue, naked we go; so then! raise your glass and drink with me! If all we get is this life's lot, there's nothing really free; better to believe in a greater scheme. then, raise your glass and drink with me, to birth and death and all that's inbetween!
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#414 |
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practical experience, FTW
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To birth and death and all that's inbetween
moments lost remembered through the years an hourglass of times pictured unseen to birth and death and all that's inbetween caught like large islands in the stream moved by emotional stress and tears to birth and death and all that's inbetween moments lost remembered through the years Last edited by onestepp; 05-15-2012 at 11:28 PM. Reason: forget a line typo |
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#415 |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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Moments lost, remembered through the years,
torment the lot of us. When we awake, there is naught but the forward face that fears moments lost. Remembered through the years are the expurgated stories one hears. The vacancies make us long to remake moments lost remembered-through. The years torment the lot of us when we awake. Last edited by Perscribo; 05-17-2012 at 09:58 AM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
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torment, the lot of us when we awake,
aware our dreams are much preferrred; with the advent of the day, others, who on the take, torment the lot of us, when we awake. drained by cares and drama, it's joy we forsake; praise and thanks so seldom heard torment the lot of us, when we awake, aware our dreams are much preferred.
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practical experience, FTW
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Aware our dreams are much preferred,
in revelry we spend our nights in complete madness, though absurd, aware. Our dreams are much preferred to the tameness of life, demure, yet a hostile world makes you quite aware. Our dreams are much preferred. In revelry we spend our nights. |
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Imagine something clever here.
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Living in the rain somewhere near Seattle.
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In revelry we spend our nights,
to leisurely repent next day. Ah, how time flies when we delight in revelry. We spend our nights unconcerned; for it's not our plight to worry if piper's paid. In revelry, we spend our nights— to leisurely repent next day.
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One of the most important people in the world
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to leisurly repent next day
as if the world were ours to spend every moment, nought but play, to leisurely repent next day brings us lack and strong dismay wishing life once more begin to leisurely repent next day, as if the world were ours to spend.
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practical experience, FTW
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As if the world were ours to spend
the oceans gather at it's tides with the sun and moon to tend as if the world were ours to spend waves wash away and mend sorrows of our souls hides as if the world were ours to spend the oceans gather at it's tides. |
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One of the most important people in the world
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the ocean gathers at its tide
packs her bags, intent to leave forever; picking up the bottles, she tries so hard to hide, the ocean gathers at its tide; sending notes in bottles, many often tried secret things afloat, thinking they were clever; the ocean gathers at its tide, packs her bags, intent to leave forever
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#422 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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Packs her bags, intent to leave forever,
but stops for one last kiss goodbye. She lingers on my lips and then never packs her bags. Intent to leave forever, her histrionics completely severs love. She, once it had gone awry, packs her bags, intent to leave forever, but stops for one last kiss goodbye. Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 06-19-2012 at 06:50 PM. Reason: I hope I didn't screw anyone up with the edit. Sorry. |
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#423 |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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Butts, tops; for one last kiss goodbye
groupies expose the sexy parts without a thought. Each wants to cry but stops, for one last kiss goodbye might be enough to dry their eyes 'til the next gig. The music starts but stops for one, last kiss: "Goodbye groupies! Expose the sexy parts!" |
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One of the most important people in the world
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groupies, expose the sexy part;
deliver the goods, for whatever amount of dollars. looking for love is a poisoned dart, you gave that up at the very start. in this business, there's no need for a heart, ignore the newcomer when she hollars; groupies! expose the sexy part, deliver the goods! for whatever amount of dollars!
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
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Deliver the goods for whatever amount of dollars.
Lost in the hood? Say your goodbyes to the strangers above who shut out such fearful callers. "Deliver the goods!" For whatever amount of dollars, you can't buy an easy exit from this looming horror. Life is good! You don't want to die. Deliver the goods for whatever amount. Of dollars lost in the hood, say your goodbyes. |
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