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Old 03-01-2012, 05:11 PM   #7976
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Sad poems can't get sad,
leaning on a shot of rye,
but they can be bad.
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Old 03-01-2012, 05:48 PM   #7977
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
but they can be bad
they can be, those dratted days
of silence and haze
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Old 03-01-2012, 05:49 PM   #7978
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I'm glad that haiku
get so much done today that
I could write this poem.
LOL.

I hope those are the Guards of Haiku
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Old 03-01-2012, 11:39 PM   #7979
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Of silence and haze
there is much confusion made --
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Old 03-02-2012, 02:05 AM   #7980
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Cyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCyia is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Wise mouths are sparing
Understanding that our words
Can raise or raze nations.
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Old 03-02-2012, 03:31 AM   #7981
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"Can raise or raze nations,"
she declared, and words fell silent
each now sacrosanct
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Old 03-02-2012, 05:09 AM   #7982
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Old 03-02-2012, 08:21 AM   #7983
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For the mind to rape
your conscience, it must bombard
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Old 03-02-2012, 08:23 AM   #7984
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you, with harbored thoughts,
peer from beneath the water -
it's your reflection?
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Old 03-02-2012, 05:21 PM   #7985
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It's your reflection
On which you obsess daily.
You see things backward.
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Old 03-02-2012, 05:23 PM   #7986
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it's your reflection
beaming up from a puddle
clearer than the clouds
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Old 03-02-2012, 06:51 PM   #7987
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clearer than the clouds
it's all about perception -
come out of the fog
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Old 03-03-2012, 12:04 AM   #7988
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Come out of the fog.
Shake the night off your shoulders.
It's this part again.
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Old 03-04-2012, 02:56 AM   #7989
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It's this part again;
missing from inventory.
He can't provide it.
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Old 03-04-2012, 10:57 AM   #7990
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He can't provide it --
but does: the security
in another "No."
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Old 03-04-2012, 11:54 AM   #7991
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in another no
but these "not possibly known"
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Old 03-04-2012, 07:36 PM   #7992
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Are probably true--
the words I believed were lies.
There is no difference
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Old 03-04-2012, 10:07 PM   #7993
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There is no difference
Between today, tomorrow,
Except in gray hairs.
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Old 03-05-2012, 02:51 AM   #7994
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Except in gray hairs
is the epitaph intoned
eternal. entombed.
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Old 03-05-2012, 07:16 AM   #7995
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Eternal. Entombed.
Drowning in a sea of grief.
Memories still rise.
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Old 03-05-2012, 09:18 AM   #7996
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Memories still rise
after we fall, sealing us
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Old 03-05-2012, 09:51 AM   #7997
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Further from our peace
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Old 03-05-2012, 10:17 AM   #7998
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pray for its return,
the holy cord that binds us -
we've all come undone
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Old 03-05-2012, 05:15 PM   #7999
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We've all come undone
untethered from the Earth, she
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sees us float away
the boathouse becomes a speck
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