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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Jan 2011
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Finally got around to UNDER THE NEVER SKY. It's not bad so far -- the writing is very clean and the prose serviceable, if the story isn't as gripping as I'd like it to be. Partially because I can't stop wondering... am I really the only one who's noticed that everyone in this story so far is white, with either blond hair and blue/green eyes, or pale skin and dark hair? In a world set 300 years in the future, in what seems to be California, that has an artificial reality where you can make yourself look however you want, and where there is genetic engineering on top of it. Okay.
Wait, everyone *except* the one "striking, dark" young woman with "almond-shaped eyes" who happened to once hook up with Perry and serves as nothing more (so far) than "artificial tension" between the MC and her burgeoning love. Which... yeah. And I won't even get into the villainous psycho in Aria's world being genetically engineered so he's the only one with tanned skin. I mean, WHAT? Bleh... |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: The South
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The Book Thief. So far, I reallllly like it!
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Angel, demon, hero, villain
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Heretogether
Posts: 48,103
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Started INCARNATE by Jodi Meadows
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Chasing Dreams
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Berlin, Germany
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Oh no! I just finished Wither this weekend and was really looking forward to starting Fever. I'll still read it anyways *grins* but I hope I wont be disappointed.
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Daughter of the Moon: Acherusian Bound - YA Urban Fantasy complete at 55k words http://akfotinoshoyer.blogspot.com |
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Chasing Dreams
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Berlin, Germany
Posts: 134
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Daughter of the Moon: Acherusian Bound - YA Urban Fantasy complete at 55k words http://akfotinoshoyer.blogspot.com |
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Tired and Disillusioned
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Here and there
Posts: 3,154
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I'm about a third of the way into AFTER THE SNOW by S. D. Crockett, which is a YA dystopia/post apocalyptic story set after the oceans have stopped working so that a mini-ice age has set in. It's written in a stylised voice, which I find works for me at the moment. In a bizarre way, this book is the polar (ha ha) opposite of BLOOD RED ROAD by Moira Young (which is set in a hot, dry world where the deserts have expanded to cover everything).
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Posts: 1,566
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Started reading PURE, it's pretty unusual.
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we are a sensational team
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Chester, Cheshire, UK
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Oh gosh I just finished "Daughter of Smoke and Bone" by Laini Taylor. SO GOOD! I seriously can't say enough good things about that book! The most beautiful thing I've read in soooo long! I am almost certain that nothing will satisfy me until I get my hands on the sequel in September....only seven months.....
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Scribble, scribble.
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: London, England
Posts: 169
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Over the weekend I finished A Northern Light by Jennifer Donnolly which is so, so good. It was published in 2003 so I discovered it a bit late but I'm really glad I read it. It's a beautifully written YA historical novel and I was rooting for the protagonist all the way through.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Posts: 1,566
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I went back to Corsets and Clockwork because the recent thread made me want to read some more steampunk. It confirmed my earlier idea--I like it best when it's punk with some Victoriana, not Victoriana with some punk. It took me half an hour to read the first short story, because it had this wordy, intricate, elegant, stylized period piece voice. I also feel a burning need to argue about the ending. xd But don't want to spoil it, because it's a twist ending.
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New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin
Join Date: Mar 2012
Posts: 18
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I just finished 'Set The Seas On Fire' By Chris Roberson.
I loved it! And I will be reading more of his books. |
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Tired and Disillusioned
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Here and there
Posts: 3,154
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I've almost finished AFTER THE SNOW by S. D. Crockett but while I like the voice for the most part (and it's definitely worth a look if you want to see an example of a stylised voice done well), there are times when I just wanted a clear description of what was happening. I've also found that the middle section of the story completely sagged so that the MC wasn't really doing much except check out what life in the city was like. That said, the story picks up in the final quarter and there's some revelation which, while not completely unexpected, to serve to give it more depth and momentum. It looks like the book's primed to have a sequel, which I'll probbaly check out.
The next book I've lined up is OLIVER TWISTED by J. D. Sharpe, which is (as the title suggests) an Oliver Twist mash-up which promises ghoulish fun. Can't wait. MM |
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figuring it all out
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Britain
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Just started Partials by Dan Wells, which the publishers sent me for review and I have heard great things about
I have heard it's one of the better dystopian/virus YA releases of the last 12 months.
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the boy with the thorn in his side
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: between coasts
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I'm reading The Disenchantments by Nina Lacour. It's even better than Hold Still. I love all the mentions of music. Nina's quickly becoming one of my favorite YA authors. I sort of want to be her best friend.
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addicted to books
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: midwest
Posts: 1,400
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Been reading too much fantasy lately, I think. I'm enjoying Daughter of Smoke and Bone, but I'm not going ga-ga over it the way some people are. The ushy-gushy, pages long, romantic prose is just a bit too much for me. I prefer more romance to be more understated, though I do like some of the unique story elements and the world building is phenomenal. |
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You can't sit with us!
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: Paris, France
Posts: 6,170
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Has anyone read any Jason Myers? I'm about to jump into DEAD END. the goodreads reviews are pretty polarizing.
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Takiran Code Scholar
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: northern New Jersey
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Reading The Marbury Lens. I'm not sure how I feel about it.
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Rewriting My Destiny
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Brillig in the slithy toves...
Posts: 12,574
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I'm really hoping this one's worth a read. It sounds great.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: The TARDIS parked at Hogwarts inside Narnia.
Posts: 150
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Tired and Disillusioned
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Here and there
Posts: 3,154
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I've just started OLIVER TWISTED by J. D. Sharpe and I almost missed my bus stop this morning because I was laughing so hard. It's a dark fantasy/horror mash up of (amazingly) OLIVER TWIST by Charles Dickens, set in a Victorian world where zombies, demons, vampyres and all manner of other mythical beasties live and where Oliver Twisted is prophesied to either be the world's saviour or its destroyer. There's a lot of humour in there, the voice really mimics Dickens's tone in the original and it's fun to see where Sharpe dove tails in with the original story before taking it in a new direction.
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addicted to books
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: midwest
Posts: 1,400
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I was actually bored to tears with this one. A lot of the Ripper stuff doesn't come into play until the middle of the book and by then what do you have but a girl who's getting acquainted with a new school and new friends? It was a unique concept, but it just felt like it could have been done so much better. |
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#6325 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Jan 2011
Posts: 630
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Starting ANGEL FIRE. I can already tell it's heading toward a love triangle, which makes me sad. But, Mexico! Major characters that are Latino! Spanish cuss words! make me happy after the last book I read reminded me too much of the scary twist in After Dachau, so hopefully it'll balance out.
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