Resend Manuscript?
Hi All -- Hoping to get some wiser advice.
I have a partial from query only (no sample pages) via Merrilee (my dream agent)'s assistant's request for close to three weeks. This isn't my first partial, and I've been getting form rejects. Thus, I've been studying plot and I confirmed a sinking feeling I had all along. My first 12 pages are fine, but the next 35 need the ax. Completely. There are great scenes in them, but the conflict doesn't move my main plot, and Act I is thus huge. Moreover, my mc ages a year between pg 12 and the 'new' chapter one, so early on you do not have a good feel for the voice of my uneducated-turned-educated YA character until the old version's page 50....the end of my partial.
When I started querying months ago, I thought it was revised to being ready (aside from some turbulent feeling that I thought was normal--ahem, the 35 pages). So I'm really kicking myself now.
Should I send an email, explaining my realization, apologizing, and asking if she's read it yet and if not, please read this one instead? From what I've seen, opinions vary. Aka, looks unprofessional, it happens go ahead, usually they're going on voice anyway so don't, no if it's plot you should...I thought maybe Writer's House submitters/clients may have a better idea on the agency's take. Thanks a bunch for any advice.