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In May 2011, I submitted my query to NY Creative Management. Jeff requested a full, and that weekend wrote back a rejection – the story wasn’t strong enough to sell. I asked him what he didn’t like, but he didn’t respond. Over the winter, I decided to stop subbing that story and switched to my newest. I submitted the new query to him in March 2012. A day later, he requested the full, and a week later, he asked to represent the manuscript! I was so excited and wrote back immediately. He said to call him the following day at noon.
I took my lunch break at noon and dialed the number he’d given me. No answer, so I left a message. At 1, he called back to say he’d accidentally given me his cell phone number. My boss was great about it and let me take a break so I could speak with Jeff. He told me that he liked the story as it was and wanted to start submitting that day. That worried me, because I’ve never had another besides poems and short stories published. I’d been hoping an agent could help me edit. He also didn’t want to work on my query or synopsis, just to email them to him so he could email them to publishers. He’d only seen my manuscript. Jeff also said he doesn’t do contracts. I was concerned, so he told his secretary to email it to me. I told him I would have a lawyer look it over (that’s what my agented friends told me to do) and I would get back to him. (On a side note, he didn’t remember seeing my full from before and wasn’t very interested in seeing other things I’d written. He said he would take a look at them rather reluctantly)
I didn’t receive the contract by the next day, so I sent a follow up email. He sent me two copies then. I thanked him and said I would have my lawyer look them over. I made an appointment with a literary lawyer, but my work schedule made it hard for us to meet. I told him it would be a few weeks and he said okay. Later that same week, he emailed to ask if I’d signed it yet. I felt bad, but I really wanted a lawyer to look at it.
Before I got in to see the lawyer, I heard back from another agent. She also wanted to represent me. The story was one I’d collaborated on with a professional illustrator – I wrote, he drew. Jeff wasn’t interested in the pictures, but this new agent was, so I decided to go with her. She also wanted to see my other manuscripts. I told him I was sorry, but because of the collaboration, I felt I should go with her.
I took my lunch break at noon and dialed the number he’d given me. No answer, so I left a message. At 1, he called back to say he’d accidentally given me his cell phone number. My boss was great about it and let me take a break so I could speak with Jeff. He told me that he liked the story as it was and wanted to start submitting that day. That worried me, because I’ve never had another besides poems and short stories published. I’d been hoping an agent could help me edit. He also didn’t want to work on my query or synopsis, just to email them to him so he could email them to publishers. He’d only seen my manuscript. Jeff also said he doesn’t do contracts. I was concerned, so he told his secretary to email it to me. I told him I would have a lawyer look it over (that’s what my agented friends told me to do) and I would get back to him. (On a side note, he didn’t remember seeing my full from before and wasn’t very interested in seeing other things I’d written. He said he would take a look at them rather reluctantly)
I didn’t receive the contract by the next day, so I sent a follow up email. He sent me two copies then. I thanked him and said I would have my lawyer look them over. I made an appointment with a literary lawyer, but my work schedule made it hard for us to meet. I told him it would be a few weeks and he said okay. Later that same week, he emailed to ask if I’d signed it yet. I felt bad, but I really wanted a lawyer to look at it.
Before I got in to see the lawyer, I heard back from another agent. She also wanted to represent me. The story was one I’d collaborated on with a professional illustrator – I wrote, he drew. Jeff wasn’t interested in the pictures, but this new agent was, so I decided to go with her. She also wanted to see my other manuscripts. I told him I was sorry, but because of the collaboration, I felt I should go with her.