Well, work faster, dagnabbit!neandermagnon, I'm glad you like the little snippets of CHERRY. As for availability and all that: I'ze working on it.
Well, work faster, dagnabbit!neandermagnon, I'm glad you like the little snippets of CHERRY. As for availability and all that: I'ze working on it.
^^^That needs to be me. Productivity has been down of late.
Greg, I like the change in the voice between the first and second segments. And the dialogue is good!
Isn't that kinda fair?In truth, they weren’t paying him fair and everyone knew it. But if you give a fourteen year old nerd endless Xbox games and Doritos you could make him do pretty much anything.
“Wait.” Wesson’s gaze focused on the floor at my feet a moment before his eyes widened. “Are those Prada shoes? You wore Prada to break into a warehouse? You’ve got to be kidding me.”
“They’re quite comfortable, I’ll have you know,” I said stiffly.
That insufferable smirk on his face, he shook his head. “Yeah, I can see how only three inch heels would be comfortable in comparison to your other neck-breakers. How in the hell are you able to move so fast in them anyway?”
“Vampire?” My tone added the implied imbecile. He glared at me and a smile touched my lips. “And I’m surprised, Detective. I did not know you could speak Shoe.” I fluttered my lashes. “You hide in the closet very well.”
Wesson choked and his back-up couldn’t cover up his laughter fast enough before swiftly walking away, leaving the two of us alone. I savored the flurry of expressions and colors that flitted over the detective’s face before he regained control of himself.
After a deep breath, he gave me his patented cop look. “My last girlfriend really liked The Devil Wears Prada, okay? And a man can learn to appreciate designer shoes if properly motivated. Especially if it’s the only thing his lady friend is wearing.”
Wait. So did he mean…?
At my small gasp, it was his turn to grin wickedly. “I find I’m a Valentino fan myself. Something about the lace and bows.”
Bloody. Hell. Though I did not embarrass easily, I felt my cheeks heat. I told myself it was at the thought of a woman trotting around like a tart in nothing but stilettos. Admittedly, however, a little part of me wondered what he enjoyed so much about the lace and bows. Then I frantically tried to banish the vision called forth following that train of thought.
At his quiet chuckle, I glared in his general direction, though I couldn’t quite meet his gaze. Cursed imagination. “How uncouth.”
He leaned down, his amber eyes dancing as he whispered, “You’re just upset we have something in common.”
“And what could that possibly be?” Hell could have frozen over from the ice in my voice.
“A couture fetish, of course.”
I was never going to be able to look at my Valentinos the same way again. Ever. Damn Wesson. The man was insufferable.
Enjoyed this a lot! Always fascinating to discover these interesting quirks about our characters, isn't it?Needed a break from editing the finished manuscript, so I opened my WIP that suffered the fatal corruption incident which shall not be named. Had a good conversation with a writer friend last night that got me thinking on this one again (it's the first in a paranormal romance series).
I know this is a little long, but I grin every time I read this scene between Stasia and Wesson:
This is a bit from the m/s I just sent back to my publisher:
The car moved, and I moved with it. Me and dad. The beach threw surfers into the air and down to the bed. People disguised as coloured umbrellas and children learning not to get caught in the rip. In a second, there it was: Number 28. Not a house at all. An empty block and cyclone fencing. Dad pulled over. We looked at the block. We looked at the road. I looked at his sagging folds of face. I looked and didn't breathe. Looked at the empty block with knee-high grass. Looked at the empty block without doors or windows or telephones. Looked at the empty block without me and dad and mum and Fleur and Gran and the ambulance. Looked at dad with his Bassett Hound jaw.
'It's gone,' he said.
Looked at the crack in the sky where she kept pouring through.
This is a bit from the m/s I just sent back to my publisher:
The narrow rooms of my single-wide trailer were too hot, even with the blackout curtains. That's what happens when you live in a metal box and it's the end of August in north Florida. There's no escaping the heat even if, like me, you're a creature of the night.
I don't mean that in a goth way, though I certainly went through that phase. What vampire hasn't? We're as prone to falling for the cliche as anyone; after all, we're only human. Well. Sort of. The point is that during the small hours, between 4 and 5 a.m. when you're starting to think about settling down safe and tired for the day, the Hot Topic website gets really tempting.
A vampire living in a trailer. Now, that's not something you see every day. I don't usually go for vampire stories, but I'd check that out.Here's the thing that I have written that is currently cracking me up for no good reason:
Here's the thing that I have written that is currently cracking me up for no good reason:
A vampire living in a trailer. Now, that's not something you see every day. I don't usually go for vampire stories, but I'd check that out.
This is funny. And the character's ordinaryness is appealing. Goth vampires, haha!
Protip from a longtime dweller in a trailer in the desert: white roof paint will cut the interior temp by as much as 20 degrees!
LOL. This HAS to be a success!Antsy antsy antsy. The Bear's Wife starts to publish tomorrow. White-knuckling it with crazy hopes of having a hit, while simultaneously reminding myself of how disappointing other book launches have been. Please please please let this at least generate gin money to fuel the next one.
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Nick squatted beside the house to feel beneath the bricks that formed its back stoop. There was practically no light; the houses were four stories tall, with lines of washing strung between, which almost entirely obscured the moon and starlight. Still, the windows across the way looked down on us. I watched them in mute resignation.
“Daagh!” Nick scattled away from the steps and hit his back on the yard’s wall. A tiny shadow squeaked and scampered away. “Vicious wee bastard bit me!”
“Cannot blame him,” Flint said. “Fingered his wee wifey, did you? Is she well-favored?”
“Aye, but too small to take me.” Nick thrust his hand under the steps again.