Hi guys, I've got Hamlet doubts on my query. I've written 8 drafts so far and 3 different versions! Nelson literary is my too choice, the query I have now is absolutely the best I've written so far, but still I don't know if it works. I've read every word on Kristin's blog about queries and I've waited 4 months to make it as perfect as it can humanly be. My problem is that I've got a lot of positive feedback from professional colleagues working in the editorial field and also from regular beta-readers. I feel that my book, an urban fantasy with an heroine with a dark humour, could stand a chance if I market it well. My problem is: am I marketing well enough? Could someone give me feedback on my query (I'll do the same with yours, if you want me to). This is so time-consuming!