• Guest please check The Index before starting a thread.

[Agency] Harold Ober Associates

FrogWrite

Registered
Joined
Jan 15, 2007
Messages
37
Reaction score
2
Thanks Zizban. Hoping he had responded to others here on the boards.
 

SkipII

[Agency] Harold Ober Assoc.

I just joined this forum and have learned a lot. So a broadcast thanks to all.

I have an 82,000-word completed manuscript that is something of a new American Graffiti meets Tuesday with Morrie. Jake Elwell of Harold Ober has taken a keen interest in it and has been extremely helpful in suggesting some edits and restructuring.

What's your problem, eh? Well, we are at a point where he seems to want to take the book away from my premise and make it more of an historical narrative. I know better than to think that a debut author can insist too much on having "my voice" or to know the market for a book as well as a good agent, but it really would turn it into a completely different book -- one that I think takes it away from my reason for writing it.

So, this may be more commiseration than a fair request for advice, but I was wondering if others had similar experience with an agent. As well, is anyone famliar with Harold Ober agency and Jake Elwell?

Thanks for any thoughts.
 
Last edited:

WestofMars

ShapeShifter
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Oct 14, 2006
Messages
97
Reaction score
3
Location
West of Mars, of course!
Website
www.westofmars.com
You need to talk to him and express how you feel. Perhaps you two aren't on the same page and maybe you and he aren't going to be the Dynamic Duo you'd hoped for.

Or perhaps he's seeing something deeper in the story that you are simply too close to see. Hear him out. Ask questions related to the direction in which he's going. Be as constructively-minded as possible.

Then, weigh what he has to say with your gut instinct and go from there.

Good luck; this is a hard one.
 

SkipII

Thanks

Always good advice. I'm never a fan of e-mail when it comes to having conversations to build mutual understanding. I'll just ask him if i can give him a call. He and I both have enough invested in this.
 

CaoPaux

Mostly Harmless
Staff member
Super Moderator
Moderator
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Feb 12, 2005
Messages
13,954
Reaction score
1,751
Location
Coastal Desert
Other agents at Harold Ober: Phyllis Westberg and Pamela Malpas
 

Rikitikitavi

Registered
Joined
Jul 17, 2007
Messages
14
Reaction score
1
Has he signed you as a client, or are these edits and rewrites a prerequisite? There is a point where you don't want to be turned into a hack writer by an agent hustling formula. Why can't a first time author be his own voice?

Riki
 

alias octavia

smooshed
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Nov 5, 2008
Messages
738
Reaction score
565
Location
in exile
Just wanted to share my experience with Phyllis Westberg. I queried by snail mail and received a prompt response in a week. A personal letter stating that she is not taking on any new clients at this time. A rejection, but very classy and nice.
 

SkipII

Great talk with Jake Elwell

I re-wrote my book and sent it to Jake since he had looked at an earlier draft of it last year. i was concerned at the time that he was trying to take it in a direction I did not want to go, but now I appreciate he was really just trying to tell me to take it some direction --it was trying to be too much to too many people. He talked with me for quite a whole after reading the whole manuscript. He had very specific and very insightful suggestions. I was impressed.

I'm hoping it moves forward.
 
Last edited:

EgyptianGoddess

Working On Life
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Mar 12, 2009
Messages
420
Reaction score
50
I wish these agencies would stop insisting on receiving queries only by postal mail. It's expensive and costly. I'm making note of this one, but will have to think about it. There are a lot that will accept email queries, after all.....
 

kellion92

A cat may not look at a king
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Sep 15, 2009
Messages
5,245
Reaction score
4,613
Location
The edge
I queried Craig Tenney at the beginning of the summer -- folded the 5 pages so it fit into a $0.44 envelope. He requested a full three days later by email. He ended up passing a week later, but he was very prompt and personable.
 

WendyN

8-armed cyborg tree
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Dec 12, 2012
Messages
1,904
Reaction score
181
Location
in the mountain's shadow
Wondering if anyone has heard from this agency (specifically Kathleen Zakhar) lately? Trying to determine on QT whether she has become a non-responder, or if she's just backlogged.
 

Hathor

Goddess of Rationalization
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Jul 9, 2008
Messages
5,497
Reaction score
321
Location
In de Nile
Wondering if anyone has heard from this agency (specifically Kathleen Zakhar) lately? Trying to determine on QT whether she has become a non-responder, or if she's just backlogged.

QT now says she is closed to queries :Shrug:
 

Moonchild

I write fluff and that's OK.
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Apr 12, 2013
Messages
1,885
Reaction score
378
Location
Vancouver Island
QT now says she is closed to queries :Shrug:

She [Kathleen Zakhar] appears to be open to queries now, but that's according to QT. The website doesn't list her as a junior/associate agent at all (just as "assistant"), and the submission guidelines say they accept snail mail only, while her QT profile states email is OK. :Shrug:

Too many inconsistencies to sort through.
 
Last edited:

MarlynnOfMany

Super Member
Registered
Joined
Aug 5, 2009
Messages
300
Reaction score
72
Location
California
Website
maralynnjohnstone.com
Has anyone been able to find a record of any sales for Kathleen? The description of what she's looking for sounds promising, though there's not much official info out there as far as I can see. She's still not listed on the official website, despite apparently working there for two years. (Though given that the agency has been going strong for over a century --!-- they may not be overly concerned with keeping the site up to date.)

The New Agent Spotlight at Writer's Digest has her submission guidelines laid out. I'm thinking of querying her just in case, though it would be nice to know a little more.
 

Liz_V

Not my first rodeo.
Kind Benefactor
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Jun 30, 2012
Messages
933
Reaction score
129
Snail-queried Craig Tenney 10/17/2014.
Got form R 10/25, according to which he's not taking on any new authors at this time.

Points for promptness, though if he's not open at all, it'd be nice if their website said so and saved both our time.
 

CaoPaux

Mostly Harmless
Staff member
Super Moderator
Moderator
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Feb 12, 2005
Messages
13,954
Reaction score
1,751
Location
Coastal Desert
For the sake of closure, Kathleen apparently left Ober (and agenting) circa Aug '14.
 

Feuilleton

Registered
Joined
Dec 7, 2015
Messages
49
Reaction score
1
Has anyone had any more recent interactions with agents at HO? Just wondering what the current response rate is like.
 

Mossy9

Super Member
Registered
Joined
Dec 15, 2013
Messages
81
Reaction score
10
Location
TX
Anyone have any recent experience with this agency? Or their junior agent Elise Erickson?