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If that is the right word.
Here is a para from my wip but I am a bit concerned that 'the lady in question' is stereotyped. What I don't want to come across is I don't like extra large ladies. I want to get my point across without offending. After all, Dawn French is a wonderful lady but how do you say fat without using the word?
I squashed myself into the forward facing seat of the Virgin cross-country express train to Leeds. I wasn’t fortunate enough to be seated at a table, and even less fortunate to have a rather heavy woman mentally note her reserved seat was situated next to me. At this point I wondered if I should use the toilet now, because once she was in the seated position she would probably need to be prised out with a giant shoehorn.
Here is a para from my wip but I am a bit concerned that 'the lady in question' is stereotyped. What I don't want to come across is I don't like extra large ladies. I want to get my point across without offending. After all, Dawn French is a wonderful lady but how do you say fat without using the word?
I squashed myself into the forward facing seat of the Virgin cross-country express train to Leeds. I wasn’t fortunate enough to be seated at a table, and even less fortunate to have a rather heavy woman mentally note her reserved seat was situated next to me. At this point I wondered if I should use the toilet now, because once she was in the seated position she would probably need to be prised out with a giant shoehorn.