The trick is to make them think you are their winning hand. It is much easier if your are Aces.
<sorry, couldn't help myself.>
You do seem to get a lot of these crazy irresistable impulses, naked guy.
The trick is to make them think you are their winning hand. It is much easier if your are Aces.
<sorry, couldn't help myself.>
I give authors a pass on the prologue. It's the first sentence of chapter 1 they better wow me with. When I'm in a store deciding whether to buy, I go to Chapter 1, read the first sentence, then skim the rest of that page, looking for a word or line of dialogue that grabs my attention. Then I open it at random in the middle and read a paragraph or two. If what I see is well written and intriguing, and the back cover is enticing, then I might buy it. I might go over the prologue if I'm indecisive, but I don't give it much weight.
I shouldn't have looked at that. Now I want to read the book
The only existing two types of people: Men and women.
The only existing two types of stories: Good and bad.
The only existing two types of prologues: Necessary and unnecessary for reader involvement.
Is that really a prologue, Jim? It reads more like a blurb for the book, to me.
Scroll down the page, Euclid. The prologue is the part that's labeled "Prologue."
Well, I'd wanted to write when I was young. And I did write a lot during middle school and high school. Then one day, when I was 19, I stopped (I even remember the last words I wrote on that occassion). And I didn't write a word of fiction again until I was 35.
I haven't stopped since.
What about hermaphrodites, mediocre stories, and prologues important to some readers but not all?
Well, I'd wanted to write when I was young. And I did write a lot during middle school and high school. Then one day, when I was 19, I stopped (I even remember the last words I wrote on that occassion). And I didn't write a word of fiction again until I was 35.
I haven't stopped since.
Going back to prologues for a minute, here's the link to one of my WIPs, so if anyone wants to check it out, feel free, and let me know what you think of the prologue. Warning, not for the faint-hearted.
Yeah, but what I really meant was that all of that is subjective to the individual reading the story. Something I think is great you might think is mediocre, or bad. A prologue can only be useful if people read them, so they can be completely necessary for reader involvement to no avail in many instances--since appearantly many readers don't read them.The mediocre stories are bad stories.
The prologues only some readers like are unnecessary for reader involvement
Well, I'd wanted to write when I was young. And I did write a lot during middle school and high school. Then one day, when I was 19, I stopped (I even remember the last words I wrote on that occassion). And I didn't write a word of fiction again until I was 35.
I haven't stopped since.
I. Mandeyn: Embrig Spaceport
At well past local midnight in Embrig Spaceport--port of call for the wealthy provincial world of Mandeyn--the Feddisgatt Allee ran almost deserted from the Port Authority offices to the Strip. The warehouses lining the Allee blocked most of the skyglow from the lighted docking areas beyond, and Mandeyn's high-riding moon shed its pale illumination only in the center of the broad Allee.
Beka Rossalin-Metadi whistled an off-key tune through her front teeth as she took a leisurely return walk down the Allee to her ship. The black wool cloak she wore against the cold of Embrig's winter night swirled around her booted ankles, and if she'd put a bit of extra swagger into her stride as she left eh Painted Lily Lounge--well, she figured she was entitled.
Damn right you're entitled, my girl, she told herself. You made a tidy profit on carrying those parts for Interworld Data, and you've got another good cargo already
Going back to prologues for a minute, here's the link to one of my WIPs, so if anyone wants to check it out, feel free, and let me know what you think of the prologue. Warning, not for the faint-hearted.
And it's time for another first page:
Will you turn the page?