Sean Bosker
Story structure and dialogue.
Hi Jim,
I’ve only recently discovered this fantastic thread. I was up late last night reading it from the beginning, and I’m only up to page 40 but I couldn’t wait to ask two questions. I hope they haven’t been covered.
1. You suggested a plot trick that entailed creating two story arcs and then substituting the climax of the first in the climax of the second, and you gave The Miller’s Tale as an example. I enjoyed the read and the idea, thank you. I’ve been going over structure, and I came across this basic plot outline on this website.
The thing is, I can’t fit the Miller’s Tale into anything approximating this outline. Am I missing something? I’m sure there’s more than one way to structure a tale, but the variance is so great that I’m wondering you think of this? Are they simply different approaches? Does the Miller’s Tale actually conform to this model and I’m missing it?
The other question I have is about dialogue formatting. I sometimes like to have one character interrupt the other, and I use an ellipsis to indicate the break in the sentence, but I’ve read in your posts that an ellipsis denotes a pause. Is there a better way to achieve the effect of dialogue interrupting dialogue? Example:
“If only I could have a steak, medium rare with...”
“Shut up about what you want for lunch and eat your MRE.”
Thanks, Jim, and the other posters. I really appreciate the work you’ve put into this thread.
Hi Jim,
I’ve only recently discovered this fantastic thread. I was up late last night reading it from the beginning, and I’m only up to page 40 but I couldn’t wait to ask two questions. I hope they haven’t been covered.
1. You suggested a plot trick that entailed creating two story arcs and then substituting the climax of the first in the climax of the second, and you gave The Miller’s Tale as an example. I enjoyed the read and the idea, thank you. I’ve been going over structure, and I came across this basic plot outline on this website.
Seven-Point Plot Outline for Genre Short Stories:
The Beginning
1. Character -- someone the reader can experience the story through
2. Conflict/problem (the "collision idea") -- the presenting problem in the story is not always the true conflict of the story, but it works best if it's related somehow.
3. Setting (where most newbie writers are very weak)
The Middle
4. Character tries to solve the problem
5. Character must fail (not for stupid reasons, though) and things must get worse (even better if the well-meaning actions of the character make it worse)--this is the most common plot development that beginners miss.
The End
6. Climax - character tries to solve the problem again (and either fails or succeeds--either outcome is valid)
7. Validation (shows that the story is over)
The thing is, I can’t fit the Miller’s Tale into anything approximating this outline. Am I missing something? I’m sure there’s more than one way to structure a tale, but the variance is so great that I’m wondering you think of this? Are they simply different approaches? Does the Miller’s Tale actually conform to this model and I’m missing it?
The other question I have is about dialogue formatting. I sometimes like to have one character interrupt the other, and I use an ellipsis to indicate the break in the sentence, but I’ve read in your posts that an ellipsis denotes a pause. Is there a better way to achieve the effect of dialogue interrupting dialogue? Example:
“If only I could have a steak, medium rare with...”
“Shut up about what you want for lunch and eat your MRE.”
Thanks, Jim, and the other posters. I really appreciate the work you’ve put into this thread.