I'm hoping that it will make it easier for people to comment by offering part of the actual story.
I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.
My thread is entitled "Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book."
I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.
Thank you in advance for your time.
David
I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.
My thread is entitled "Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book."
I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.
Thank you in advance for your time.
David
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