Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy"

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Prosperity7

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I'm hoping that it will make it easier for people to comment by offering part of the actual story.

I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.

My thread is entitled "
Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book."

I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.


Thank you in advance for your time.

David:D
 
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What kind of a Predator is "Daddy"?

Prosperity7 said:
I'm hoping that it will make it easier for people to comment by offering part of the actual story.

I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.

My thread is entitled "
Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book."

I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.


Thank you in advance for your time.

David:D


Predatory Dad, ik.
 
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