Cinquain Train

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they're blind
to the pains that
school offers. the homework,
the books, the exams, the bullies.
Such pain.
 

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So quiet—
nights still get cold,
day’s song ends at sunset.
Crickets must wonder if they woke
too soon.
 

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forget
the study, kids.
get ready for picnic.
in the vast forest we'll explore
nature.
 

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Blood lines
drawn down my arm.
Linked by a timeless rite—
spring finds me pruning roses bare-
handed.




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Blood lines
drawn on my arm.
Following timeless rites—
spring finds me pruning roses, bare-
handed.
 
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to love
you is a gift.
a walk in the forest.
a swim in the lake. a flight with
the clouds.
 

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don't stop
open the blind
louver its gills for light
angled like a manta ray, broad,
gentle
 

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Gentle
days, chilly nights.
Seedlings press against the
cold-frame glass in their struggle to
escape.
 
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secret
is a seed that
if watered with guilt grows
weeds of self-destruction. break them
with friends.
 

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With friends
you share the joy
bounce laughter off the walls
and hold at bay oblivion
for hours.
 

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for hours
you hold anger
at the unfair world. grief
turns to canines and you bite when
threatened
 

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floating
in memories
of pain, bitterness seeps
in your soul and infects it with
despair
 

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Despair
encircles you
with tentacles of night.
Black holes of chilling emptiness
bite down.