Maddog, I'm sorry. I mixed you up with Muggsie. But I guess it made sense, huh? Critique groups/partners are great things. I never could have gotten as far as I did without them. But, you're right, you get to a point where self-editing is all you need. I find that self-doubt is pretty prevalent at this stage but, hey, you have to pluck out those confidence bones and believe in yourself. Because there is a scary thing known as over-critiquing and that's to be avoided at ALL costs. LOL.
Muggsie -- Mainstream fiction is a totally different species from TV, children's and business writing. Pacing, layering, world building are major key factors that don't exist in any of the other genres you write. And this is where your talent and voice enter into the picture. You either have it or you don't. I'm certain you're well-read, but perhaps you could read more within the line of your target audience?
I still say -- move on for now. Write your next book. With each turn of the page, we grow and improve our skills. Give it a rest and come back when you've found your voice. All the pieces will then come together and you can fix this one. Very rarely do first books sell -- and this really is your "first" book because its outside of the boundaries of what you've done before. It's like me trying to write a children's book. I wouldn't have the faintest idea where to begin. And I've attempted some TV as well, so I'm well aware the major differences in that arena.
And showing vs. telling? The toughest thing in the world to nail down.
And I'm sorry about this rejection...I understand (trust me! I understand). Whine and moan for awhile, drink -- eat chocolate -- do whatever makes you feel better -- then MOVE ON.
Hey, I think this thread should probably be moved.....it seems to have gone astray from B&B.
