Day 2
I did some heavy revision of a story that's been nagging me for ages and forced myself to make some difficult choices. I think I only added a couple of hundred words, but it's definitely a pass today for the effort I put in as it brought me over a road bump.

heykatydid & DL - Good to see you both here again! You're sticking with it better than I am, it seems!

ajaye, thereenees, OctoberLee, Willow Bern - Nice to see you all here, welcome!