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    Where are the scene breaks if i am following one character around for a long time?

    I have pages of one character running through his day. He starts by himself, goes outside to help a guy, is sent back inside where he talks to someone else, and then back outside where there are now more people. He's involved in three different discrete activities during this time. About 1300 words.

    Is this one scene? Only the MC person is consistently present throughout, and there is no break in the time. It is his POV. The setting changes from inside to outside to inside to outside.
    Last edited by Patty; 12-29-2017 at 12:22 AM.
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