So every once in a while, the 'correct' description in my narrative is something like "his brow furrowed' ... and I hate that particular turn of a phrase. There are others I hate that have similar frequent play in books that I read.
Is it just me that dislikes this phrase? I can get past it, if it is just me, because the efficiency of "his brow furrowed' is tough to beat. I've spent a long time playing with it and may be wasting my time since furrowed brows seem to exist in many books.
Does this phrase ever bother you? Are there other common phrases that are personal pet peeves? Do you have tricks to get past them?
Patty brainstorming...
He wrinkled the space between his eyes.
He was concerned
He thought hard
It was clear to everyone that he was deep in thought
The wrinkles on his forehead became more obvious. (LOLOL)
... his brow furrowed.
Sigh.
Is it just me that dislikes this phrase? I can get past it, if it is just me, because the efficiency of "his brow furrowed' is tough to beat. I've spent a long time playing with it and may be wasting my time since furrowed brows seem to exist in many books.
Does this phrase ever bother you? Are there other common phrases that are personal pet peeves? Do you have tricks to get past them?
Patty brainstorming...
He wrinkled the space between his eyes.
He was concerned
He thought hard
It was clear to everyone that he was deep in thought
The wrinkles on his forehead became more obvious. (LOLOL)
... his brow furrowed.
Sigh.