I've heard the advice to write in active voice not passive voice. (but the advice has never been satisfactorily explained.)
Sometimes the advice is explained as: Avoid verbs of being.
Help!
I understand the sentence "She was thinking about him" may be better as "She thought about him" (Or maybe not.) 'She thought' is more active than 'she was thinking.'
I could rewrite the sentence: "Janet was surprised how calm her voice sounded" as "It surprised Janet that her voice sounded calm." I have no idea if the second is objectively superior because I have changed the subject so that the verb is active. ??
I can use help and thoughts about active/passive voice. I've been writing 'by ear.' I'm now looking for the details that may bump up the writing.
Some readers don't flag my writing as passive, but my background is academic and I probably use passive as a matter of training. One person mentions it regularly to me.
Sometimes the advice is explained as: Avoid verbs of being.
Help!
I understand the sentence "She was thinking about him" may be better as "She thought about him" (Or maybe not.) 'She thought' is more active than 'she was thinking.'
I could rewrite the sentence: "Janet was surprised how calm her voice sounded" as "It surprised Janet that her voice sounded calm." I have no idea if the second is objectively superior because I have changed the subject so that the verb is active. ??
I can use help and thoughts about active/passive voice. I've been writing 'by ear.' I'm now looking for the details that may bump up the writing.
Some readers don't flag my writing as passive, but my background is academic and I probably use passive as a matter of training. One person mentions it regularly to me.
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