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I'm writing a sci-fi romance where there is a tribe of winged hominids. Their wings are similar to those in angel lore -feathery and separate from their arms and hands. I worked out the mythos of how they came to exist but struggle with explaining why their wingspan is not crazily wide. Everywhere I researched, explains the impracticability of winged hominids because the wingspan would have to be quite wide. How likely would you -as a reader suspend your belief on why it's possible for hominids to have them and be approximately the stereotypical size of angel wings? Would you need the story to explain it?
 
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For sci fi, I would care. For fantasy, I wouldn't care.
 

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I don't foresee it being a super technical sci-fi. It's more in the Otavia Bulter, Lilith's Brood vein of story telling. Or if I can use a tv show Doctor Who or Star Trek-ish :beam:. Some plausible science thrown around but not much
 

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I think it would bother me less in a novel than a visual medium. If I'm watching a show or movie and people are flying around with these cute little angel wings it's hard to stop myself from thinking, "that would never work," but in a book you don't necessarily have to provide the exact wingspan, you can leave it up to the reader's imagination. And, like people said, it's more easily acceptable in fantasy than hard sci-fi, and if there's magic in the world you can always just say they fly with the aid of magic and just use their wings to help glide and steer.

In Flight of Dragons it's made clear that the dragons' wings (which do look too small for them to fly with) are just for steering and that their power of flight actually functions more like a hot air balloon; their stomachs fill with gas, which allows them to float up. I'm not sure that's all that scientifically plausible either, but I could accept it within the context of the story.
 

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My story doesn't really have magic in it, it's a sci-fi. There is very advance technology which allows my characters to augment their bodies. They have the capability to augment their body through upgrades -not all have wings, just a few sects. The way my story is set, nearly everyone utilities the tech but not everyone knows or is interested in knowing the intricate details of how the technology works. If I could compare it, it's like how we all (or most all) have a mobile phone or have use a mobile phone. Nearly everyone who have used a mobile phone, knows how to make one work (more or less) -we know how to turn it on and dial a number. We may even know some little tricks to tinker with it if there are any issues (id est: poor reception means we need to move to another area to pick up better reception). But many don't know the mechanisms that make a mobile phone work. Or how to repair a refrigerator when it's broken. Yes we can probably google or youtube how to repair a refrigerator but most of us just call someone to fix it. In my story, the people could acquire the knowledge of how certain things work but they're lazy like we are and pretty much rely on the tech to build or repair itself. There are some specialist who monitor the tech but they don't necessarily go around explaining things in great details -it's like how a doctor may say you need stitches and tell you they are using dissolvable stitches so you don't have to come back to them to get them remove but don't necessarily explain how they stitch you up, what kind of material they use to stitch you, etc. I don't particularly want to make the focus on the science as its more about a romance but I don't want to make it too difficult science wise for people to suspend their disbelief...
 

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i wouldnt worry too much about suspension of belief, the marvel universe has 2 semi-main characters who fly using natural and mechanical wings respectively and they seem to do alright.
 

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I wouldn't worry about it, humans flying is already completely unbelievable (in my opinion) so their wingspan wouldn't matter to me. The Lake House/When the Wind Blows by James Patterson is a story about kids with wings who can fly (Love those books) and their span isn't large enough to actually make them fly, but it's a fiction book so it doesn't matter.

A person apparently(got this from google) would need a 6/7 meter wing span and then those wings would be so heavy we couldn't use them to fly anyways. So I say make the wings however you want them and don't get caught up in trying to make sense of it. Shapeshifters, wearwolves, vampires, etc...there are many forms of humans that are physically unbelievable, but readers want to escape when reading fantasy/romance....heck when I read some novels that are filled with alpha male billionaires it's funny because, billionaires don't look like that, it's completely unbelievable, but we aren't reading for the believable :)
 

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Thank you all. I think I won't worry about the wingspan. I don't intend to sell my book as a hard sci-fi so hopefully readers won't have too high expectations lol.
 

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Thank you all. I think I won't worry about the wingspan. I don't intend to sell my book as a hard sci-fi so hopefully readers won't have too high expectations lol.

Even hard sci-fi doesn't make sense, its still fiction. Humans traveling at light speed...sorry not scientifically plausible, teleporting? Beam me up Scotty! Ya ok. So I'm a huge Star Trek fan, and Star Wars fan, even though neither of those franchises make any scientific plausible sense, as if Anakin didn't know Padmae(however you spell her name) as if he didn't detect two heartbeats. So those who think science fiction is more precise or makes more sense than fantasy....I think it's all fiction and neither genre can claim being more realistic. Lord of the Rings is just as far out there as Star Wars.

Jeeze that all makes sense in my head, but typing it out it's an entirely different story!

So at the end of the day, a story about people with wings could be sci-fi....if that is what you want :) If Captain Kirk can teleport, than somebody can fly!
 

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lol yes this is my thought too lol. I know I personally don't get too bogged down by things in Star Trek, or Star Wars, or other sci-fi series. As long as there is consistence to the technology/magic I generally go along with it. Hopefully, I write a story worthy of people willing to suspend their disbelief and go along with the story.
 

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The sci fi wing units would just need to have some kind of anti-gravity built in. If it is a sci fi world i would want at least a hand-wavey explanation to make it plausible.
 

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This is kinda off-topic, but I consider Star Wars to be thinly veiled fantasy rather than sci-fi. It has some sci-fi trappings (like space travel) but the Force is basically magic. Star Trek at least tries to stay within the realm of scientific possibility and provide plausible-sounding explanations.

I like veinglory's idea of incorporating some kind of anti-gravity technology (or a jet-pack!) just to give the believability a boost, so to speak. Or, for the humans with biological wings, you could change their biology in other ways to make flight more plausible. Maybe they have lightweight or hollow bones like birds. I mean, yeah, you probably don't want to spend too much time within the story talking about the wings and how they work because I'm guessing that's not the focus, but when a concept like that is introduced, I think fleshing it out some makes the story feel more immersive and real.
 

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The sci fi wing units would just need to have some kind of anti-gravity built in. If it is a sci fi world i would want at least a hand-wavey explanation to make it plausible.

That makes sense, and I love the term hand-wavey :)

Puff the Magic Dragon has a set of tiny wings, and he's huge! :)