I'm definitely gonna have to go back and edit this first draft... I'm not happy with this first line, but I want to write stuff, and get my ideas down. I can't sit on this story idea any longer (been on it since 2015).
Anyway, here is the first line/sentence, where I'm trying to set the atmosphere of the scene. I had something better penned in my head the other day, but I forgot to write it down.
Anyway, here is the first line/sentence, where I'm trying to set the atmosphere of the scene. I had something better penned in my head the other day, but I forgot to write it down.
The buzz of the fluorescent lights fill the lecture hall with a monotonous hum that perfectly matches the oppressive hue bathing the room.
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