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I know this is weird, but...I'm writing a eulogy for someone I love; the funeral will be Wednesday. I can't attend because it is in another country, but a family member volunteered to read for me at the service.
It is about a page long, and I'm just looking for some feedback about what the writing "sounds" like to someone else. I don't want to post the eulogy, but would be really grateful if someone were willing to give me their email in a PM, and then give me some feedback. I need this piece to be very good.
It is about a page long, and I'm just looking for some feedback about what the writing "sounds" like to someone else. I don't want to post the eulogy, but would be really grateful if someone were willing to give me their email in a PM, and then give me some feedback. I need this piece to be very good.
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