I know some portion of the population gets annoyed or has difficulty reading italics. I am one of those people. To look good and be halfway readable, they also need to be a different font--which sort of matters more now in the digital age, when people can change things on their ereader, phone, computer, whatever. Simply slanting a font often looks pretty garbage.
So why haven't novel writers gotten together and come up with punctuation for thoughts? Preferably, using a common symbol that is not usually used in writing. My current idea is the equal sign, but that might not be ideal. I don't know of another reason other than literal math to use it in text.
Pros:
Relatively non-obtrusive. Mostly universal due to math. Has a key on most keyboards (no alt+# junk). Middle position might suggest more inward connotation vs upper quotes or low line punctuation like period, comma.
Cons:
Some fonts could make it too similar to dashes or hyphens. (But we use colon/semi-colon and period/comma.) Similarly, certain vision issues might blur it together. (Not sure they'd be able to read at all in that case, though.) The simple fact it would be new to readers.
Well, that was just irresponsible, John thought. No one should be running around blindfolded in a rake factory.
vs
=Well, that was just irresponsible,= John thought. =No one should be running around blindfolded in a rake factory.=
or, less attractive
What a prick! "I'm sure he's nice."
vs
=What a prick!= "I'm sure he's nice."
This just kind of hit me the other day, and the more I think about it, the more it seems like people should have come up with something better a long time ago. I mean, when you get into a whole thought paragraph, italics are horrendous, while sometimes I don't even notice short bits. But it is wonderfully effective for character to get actual thoughts, even in the third person.
I am very seriously considering a strong push for this in my own book if I get a deal, so thoughts and rebuttals would be wonderful.
So why haven't novel writers gotten together and come up with punctuation for thoughts? Preferably, using a common symbol that is not usually used in writing. My current idea is the equal sign, but that might not be ideal. I don't know of another reason other than literal math to use it in text.
Pros:
Relatively non-obtrusive. Mostly universal due to math. Has a key on most keyboards (no alt+# junk). Middle position might suggest more inward connotation vs upper quotes or low line punctuation like period, comma.
Cons:
Some fonts could make it too similar to dashes or hyphens. (But we use colon/semi-colon and period/comma.) Similarly, certain vision issues might blur it together. (Not sure they'd be able to read at all in that case, though.) The simple fact it would be new to readers.
Well, that was just irresponsible, John thought. No one should be running around blindfolded in a rake factory.
vs
=Well, that was just irresponsible,= John thought. =No one should be running around blindfolded in a rake factory.=
or, less attractive
What a prick! "I'm sure he's nice."
vs
=What a prick!= "I'm sure he's nice."
This just kind of hit me the other day, and the more I think about it, the more it seems like people should have come up with something better a long time ago. I mean, when you get into a whole thought paragraph, italics are horrendous, while sometimes I don't even notice short bits. But it is wonderfully effective for character to get actual thoughts, even in the third person.
I am very seriously considering a strong push for this in my own book if I get a deal, so thoughts and rebuttals would be wonderful.
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