What do you do,
When not doing is the same as doing?
Where do you go,
when there is the same as here?
Who do you ask,
When everyone says the same thing?
When do you wake up,
When tomorrow is just another yesterday?
In my creative writing class we focused on concrete poetry, using nouns. In fact when i rewrote my poems my instructor kept telling me 'more nouns less verbs' So as this poem was written as an exercise in verbs rather than nouns.
When not doing is the same as doing?
Where do you go,
when there is the same as here?
Who do you ask,
When everyone says the same thing?
When do you wake up,
When tomorrow is just another yesterday?
In my creative writing class we focused on concrete poetry, using nouns. In fact when i rewrote my poems my instructor kept telling me 'more nouns less verbs' So as this poem was written as an exercise in verbs rather than nouns.