Hi all. At my manuscript's low point our plucky ensemble cast is ambushed by a company of mercenaries while their leaders are away. Half their number (originally about 30) are wiped out in a bloody nighttime forest battle. In my synopsis I need to condense all this into a single sentence. Currently it goes like "A parley turns into a double-cross, and though scattered and decimated they must [plot plot plot]..."
I don't want to use "decimated" because it actually means to reduce by one-tenth, not half. "Devastated" doesn't seem right cause that makes it sound like they're just really really sad. "Half-slaughtered" sounds clunky. I'm pretty much at my word limit so I can't really use more than one or two words here. Any suggestions?
Thanks a trillion!
I don't want to use "decimated" because it actually means to reduce by one-tenth, not half. "Devastated" doesn't seem right cause that makes it sound like they're just really really sad. "Half-slaughtered" sounds clunky. I'm pretty much at my word limit so I can't really use more than one or two words here. Any suggestions?
Thanks a trillion!