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During editing we cut stuff because it doesn't belong there, even if, in itself, we like it.
So let's paste in some of our best cut stuff
I'll start:
So let's paste in some of our best cut stuff
I'll start:
[FONT="] “Well, you will now,” drawled Bob in his macho menacing voice, and even added a sinister cackle, which mutated into a cough which in turn produced another gob spat onto a wall.[/FONT]
[FONT="][/FONT][FONT="]Jen wasn’t too shaken by the sinister cackle—she took it to be just ego theater of someone who has lived in repressed and denied terror his whole life. This self-pity, self-loathing, and constant fright were the components out of which thugs like him wove their manliness. [/FONT]