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Thread: She of Another Dimension

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    She of Another Dimension

    There's chaos in
    her silhouette,
    a storm concealed,
    compressed until
    it vanishes from
    the human eye
    to rage in the
    shadows of shadows.
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    Grand Duchess Ambrosia's Avatar
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    Nice, William.

    Thank you for posting another poem. I look forward to reading the poetry you offer us. It's like a person fighting death by thirst in the desert finding a little stream of water.
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    "The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."
    Michelangelo

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    reading all the things Anna Iguana's Avatar
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    Only recently did I encounter the idea of one-sentence (but multi-line) poems. I like the image this one accomplishes, William.

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    you're both very kind. thank you for reading and commenting.
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    Dark Gritty Reboot
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    Lovely imagery and forced me to reread 10-12 times without quite​ figuring it out. Which is awesome.

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