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A bit of context: I'm writing a paranormal adventure in the vein of Constantine, Dresden and Supernatural about a boy who loses his parents to an explosion caused by an ifritt he foolishly made a deal with. He wakes up in hospital in intensive care, recovering and dealing with grafts along the left half of his body when more dark forces gather, cause the hospital to go into a lockdown, and hunt him and a small band of patients, visitors and staff throughout the large building.
The threat is very real, with survivors being picked off by various creatures, ghouls and similar threats. But I also had an idea that one of the group - a patient with a serious condition (maybe some form of cancer) who the MC forms a strong friendship with - survives until the end is in sight, only ro succumb to their illness.
Would this be seen as cheap, for a character to die of something so normal and mortal after being faced with numerous dark, otherworldly dangers? I don't want it to be anticlimatic, but rather strongly emotional and a harsh reminder to the MC that no matter how hard he fights the monsters of my world, even he can't save everyone from their fates, even he can't deny death all the time.
Any advice or comments would be greatly appreciated.
Dave
The threat is very real, with survivors being picked off by various creatures, ghouls and similar threats. But I also had an idea that one of the group - a patient with a serious condition (maybe some form of cancer) who the MC forms a strong friendship with - survives until the end is in sight, only ro succumb to their illness.
Would this be seen as cheap, for a character to die of something so normal and mortal after being faced with numerous dark, otherworldly dangers? I don't want it to be anticlimatic, but rather strongly emotional and a harsh reminder to the MC that no matter how hard he fights the monsters of my world, even he can't save everyone from their fates, even he can't deny death all the time.
Any advice or comments would be greatly appreciated.
Dave