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    Burn through or stop/review?

    It's the big question for me right now, and I need some opinions.
    Started writing about two weeks ago, currently up to 27665 words, which is far more than I've written in years. What usually happens is I start well, lose confidence and butcher myself with editing before finishing. Well, I don't want to do that anymore.
    But, on the other hand, I've realised that actually what I've written is totally awful from a plot point of view. Pointless characters, embarrassing tropes, and, most horrifyingly, terrible stereotypes. There needs to be a significant edit of what's been written so far.
    So there is the dilemma. Do I burn through, follow the story as-is and then spend a lot of time reviewing and editing, or do I edit what I've got and then continue?
    What would you do in this situation?

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    Quote Originally Posted by MDogJr View Post
    It's the big question for me right now, and I need some opinions.
    Started writing about two weeks ago, currently up to 27665 words, which is far more than I've written in years. What usually happens is I start well, lose confidence and butcher myself with editing before finishing. Well, I don't want to do that anymore.
    But, on the other hand, I've realised that actually what I've written is totally awful from a plot point of view. Pointless characters, embarrassing tropes, and, most horrifyingly, terrible stereotypes. There needs to be a significant edit of what's been written so far.
    So there is the dilemma. Do I burn through, follow the story as-is and then spend a lot of time reviewing and editing, or do I edit what I've got and then continue?
    What would you do in this situation?
    Given that you have a history of abandoning your work during editing, I'd say burn through.

    Talked to a guy at a con a couple of weeks ago who asserted that a first draft needs to do two things: 1. be complete, and 2. suck. Which is a bit of an exaggeration (and certainly not everyone's methodology!), but I do subscribe to the idea that having a complete draft in dire need of editing is MUCH better than having a partial draft that you've poked at so much you've come to hate.

    Your old method hasn't done it for you. Why not try something new and see how it goes?
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    Quote Originally Posted by MDogJr View Post
    It's the big question for me right now, and I need some opinions.
    Started writing about two weeks ago, currently up to 27665 words, which is far more than I've written in years. What usually happens is I start well, lose confidence and butcher myself with editing before finishing. Well, I don't want to do that anymore.
    But, on the other hand, I've realised that actually what I've written is totally awful from a plot point of view. Pointless characters, embarrassing tropes, and, most horrifyingly, terrible stereotypes. There needs to be a significant edit of what's been written so far.
    So there is the dilemma. Do I burn through, follow the story as-is and then spend a lot of time reviewing and editing, or do I edit what I've got and then continue?
    What would you do in this situation?
    There are as many different methods as there are writers, although I agree with Lizmonster that, maybe for you, it's time to try a different approach.

    At the rate you're writing you could have a full length novel in three or four weeks, so I'd say go for it - then put it to one side for a month and do something else. Come back to it, read it, decide what you don't like about it, decide what you want it to be, and make it so.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MDogJr View Post
    Do I burn through, follow the story as-is and then spend a lot of time reviewing and editing, or do I edit what I've got and then continue?
    Absolutely.

    Either works, or any combination, but what is important is what works for you. How I write best is unlikely to be identical to how you write best and there's only one solution that always works, every time, no matter what. It's called Butt In Chair. Write the story and don't stop until it is entirely finished, edited multiple times, reread and rewritten until it's perfect.

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    You ever feel like things are just working against you?
    The more I've thought about this story the less it makes sense, and it's got to a point where almost all of it is totally pointless. It tells a story - but what about? Nothing. It's a story for a story's sake, and I'm just not comfortable creating that.
    You'll all probably groan and roll your eyes at this, but I think it's for the best to just... start over. Spend longer planning out, crating real story arcs, engaging characters with realistic motives, you know, actually doing something worth the time haha
    But thank you for the advice, all of you

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    Make a note, and continue the story as though the change has already been made.
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    I'd keep going, keeping an eye on what you don't like about the first part - that's how you find out the story! Especially if going back to edit makes you stop writing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MDogJr View Post
    What would you do in this situation?
    I edit and revise as I go, so there's your answer to that question. There's no way I'd want to revise a whole novel's worth of the first scrapings off the top of my mind.

    If you don't want to fall into the constant rewriting of the opening chapters trap, but don't want to forge ahead and end up with a mess, try writing at a slower pace and giving yourself time to think things through. That will result in some rewriting as you go, but maybe not so much you get stalled.

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