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Without meaning to be lectury myself -- Anna's post struck me, in how different it is from Laer's.
LC -- I'm just trying to explain what you seem not to see that other people do. This, I think, might be a good example. Anna's post is discussing feminism, but it doesn't read as lecturing, pontificating or the like. Her post is more about linking her personal ideas to larger social discussion and asking questions that seem to arise out of that. Your post is more of a lecture -- this is feminism, there are black women who have it very bad; in China.... the only place you say I is in terms of you understood something then saw wider implications, which you outline in the same style, then say 'the feminist frontier is everywhere.'' Well gee, uhm, thanks?
Can you see how one post is more discussion-oriented, one is more pontificating? You do ask a question, but it reads like a teacher delivering a lecture about a basic subject and then asking the class 'so what do you think about communism [that I just explained to you?]' It's much more (from my reading of it) 'here, I bring you information; now that you've learned this, do you have further thoughts?'
I'm not trying to be harsh or anything -- you asked in the other post to explain how to spot what you're doing. This seemed like an example of what I believe other people are seeing in your posts that you're not.
LC -- I'm just trying to explain what you seem not to see that other people do. This, I think, might be a good example. Anna's post is discussing feminism, but it doesn't read as lecturing, pontificating or the like. Her post is more about linking her personal ideas to larger social discussion and asking questions that seem to arise out of that. Your post is more of a lecture -- this is feminism, there are black women who have it very bad; in China.... the only place you say I is in terms of you understood something then saw wider implications, which you outline in the same style, then say 'the feminist frontier is everywhere.'' Well gee, uhm, thanks?
Can you see how one post is more discussion-oriented, one is more pontificating? You do ask a question, but it reads like a teacher delivering a lecture about a basic subject and then asking the class 'so what do you think about communism [that I just explained to you?]' It's much more (from my reading of it) 'here, I bring you information; now that you've learned this, do you have further thoughts?'
I'm not trying to be harsh or anything -- you asked in the other post to explain how to spot what you're doing. This seemed like an example of what I believe other people are seeing in your posts that you're not.