If anyone is interested in swapping a flash fiction piece, please PM me, or email me at eniac_caine(AT)hotmail(DOT)com. I'll read up to 2000 words.
The piece I'd like looked at is about 700 words, so it should go quickly. Here's the first three lines of DAGGER TO THE BACK.
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No one in the dojang was surprised when Kal Joo-Won proposed to Nalisa. The two of them spent countless hours together, obsessed with fulfilling the Master’s mantra: defeat any opponent by out training them. Long after the sword school closed every evening, they remained, executing complicated maneuvers in the echoing silence of the empty hall.
The piece I'd like looked at is about 700 words, so it should go quickly. Here's the first three lines of DAGGER TO THE BACK.
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No one in the dojang was surprised when Kal Joo-Won proposed to Nalisa. The two of them spent countless hours together, obsessed with fulfilling the Master’s mantra: defeat any opponent by out training them. Long after the sword school closed every evening, they remained, executing complicated maneuvers in the echoing silence of the empty hall.